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One Love

*Bridging The Rap*

Stanza Productions *Dem City Boys*

No Show?
Well if it Be Then Nigga's know That I was already Poppin Studs
You dont want to play this Game all the vota's Gon' See is Blood
Cmon Man Ya Rhymes is too loose man....Care to be tightened?
News Flash?...Your wack .....Jus Thought You should be enlightend
Well Since all of RV already knows that Your the "Next Gay Nigga"
Ill Be Like the guy In ya Sig...& Turn My back instead of Pullin the Trigga!



Its should be a crime to battles such wackness...a Trash of my Time
I would cut ya words short......but I Can see you already Slashed Yo lines

I know you know bout 1st grade seein as you been in it for 4 yrs Straight
and for your common knowledge raps and Gas dont rhymes or relate
Ya Carrer is described by Ya record.....from Somethin to nothing
You Demote yaself When Ya Last Album wasnt even remotely Thumpin

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One Love

*Bridging The Rap*

Stanza Productions *Dem City Boys*

im a be switchin tha views cats think ya bright till i end light like im tripping a fuse/ lmao @ predictions)
ur tryin ta dig deep but not even scratchin da surface ur just itching ta lose/

stanza heres some news you already "lost boy" ur a "fairy" an im da "better man"/
understand these kids should of "picked-E" ta "dust" u cuz ur punches "never land"/

yep mayn u bout ta burn an roast, cuz dis verse will leave you left in hell/
and stanza in "terms of votes",u gon be "4 down" like dis is da "N-F-L"/

beat E...him na hes in a class wit da rest hopin cuz i come correct wit da text smokin/
I'm 1 of da best flowin call me dat lyrical pirate cuz kid im leavin ya chest open/

cuz you came thinkin ya was ill but was checked an released for false symptoms/
so i'll excuse this bitch 4 livin, but as far as sickness that virus must of missed um/

really re-read re-write ur lines a 1000 times an ur still not gon make it rhyme/
just take ur time cuz E's divine and ya punches never connect like adjacent lines/

an dats why you cant stop da best nigga its was pointless dat u even dropped ya text/
u'll be mopped and swept when i pop ya chest "down da middle" like I just called collect/

so heres my second week Prediction i bet i kill stanza cuz kids lyrics are neva ill/
easy win but yet and still Im fittin ta put holes in ya like some black and Decker drills/

so now im a finish him.....................

im the answer if da leagues fallin an ur the main problem so take this L an stop ballin/
im movin up in ranks an ur fallin cause me verse u is one more addition to ya loss column/

I guess were open for votes then ......................

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One Love

*Bridging The Rap*

Stanza Productions *Dem City Boys*

Cmon Man Ya Rhymes is too loose man....Care to be tightened?
News Flash?...Your wack .....Jus Thought You should be enlightend
Its should be a crime to battles such wackness...a Trash of my Time
I would cut ya words short......but I Can see you already Slashed Yo lines

vs.

NOTHING.


WAAHHH!! WAAHHH!! Do not fucking moan Enlightend...
This battle was weak, Enlightend had no punches worth quoting because it was all played stuff and "like this" and "like that". Dude, you can only get away with like one of those punches in a verse, and it must be dope. Also, stop with the // at the end of your bars.. people will know when they end because they will catch the rhyme.. not to mention you will move down to the next bar unless you write it all like a paragraph. Anyway, Stanza wins this because he had two bars that I felt were worth quoting not because they were super ill, but because they were ok enough and had the potential to be killer. That slash yo lines could've been fucking raw if you worded it correctly.

Anyway...

V/ - Stanza

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Stanza wins.

The lines that Fletcher quoted pretty much won it for him... Enlightend came with absolutely nothing at all. Realllllllly stretched out lines that had weak concepts and absolutely no delivery. Seemed like you're Ez-Board trained... or something. Anyways, you need to come up with harder, fresher concepts if you want to get anywhere. Neither of your wording was very good but Stanza's was obviously superior with better concepts.

Vote:
Stanza

ROFL at the blatant D/R.....vs. Nothingg huh..at least disguise when you goingg to vote straightt forr a nigga without readingg verses.....

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King of Saint Lou

d/r? cmon Man none of the guys who voted for me are my people ...i mean me and nick have battled to many times to even d/r each other and I dont even know comedian man so stop bitchin for your girlfriend

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One Love

*Bridging The Rap*

Stanza Productions *Dem City Boys*

Fuck it...its nott my battle so its on E

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King of Saint Lou

Listen cheese dick... I said NOTHING because Enlightend had NO BARS worth quoting you dumb fuck. And I have battled stanza too many times and we have beefed many times before. Why the fuck would I dickride him? And if I was actually cool with him like that, why the fuck would I have just rejected him when he tried to get in TE. He ain't the best, this battle was weak.. but he had a better verse than that 2004 herb excuse for a verse from your boy. If anyone is dickriding, it is you dicking your next generation assclown by complaining about votes in a battle you aint even involved in.

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2-0 im up .////......more votes?.................

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One Love

*Bridging The Rap*

Stanza Productions *Dem City Boys*

Stanza

Cmon Man Ya Rhymes is too loose man....Care to be tightened?
News Flash?...Your wack .....Jus Thought You should be enlightend


Its should be a crime to battles such wackness...a Trash of my Time
I would cut ya words short......but I Can see you already Slashed Yo lines

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Enlightend

really re-read re-write ur lines a 1000 times an ur still not gon make it rhyme/
just take ur time cuz E's divine and ya punches never connect like adjacent lines/



aight well enlightend his lines weren't bad...they juss weren't really hard hitting at all...like the spacing and slashes at the end isn't necassary...juss makes u look like a newbie..i think u have potential you had some good ideas but the wording wasn't there...stanza had 2 pretty cool punches enuff to take this...

vote-stanza

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STAN

Cmon Man Ya Rhymes is too loose man....Care to be tightened?
News Flash?...Your wack .....Jus Thought You should be enlightend
^ ^OK INSULT
Its should be a crime to battles such wackness...a Trash of my Time
I would cut ya words short......but I Can see you already Slashed Yo lines
^ ^LOL GOOD JAB AT THE NEWBISH STUFF
I know you know bout 1st grade seein as you been in it for 4 yrs Straight
and for your common knowledge raps and Gas dont rhymes or relate
GOOD CAUSE IT’S THE TRUTH


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yep mayn u bout ta burn an roast, cuz dis verse will leave you left in hell/
and stanza in "terms of votes",u gon be "4 down" like dis is da "N-F-L"/
^ ^THAT’S ALRIGHT
really re-read re-write ur lines a 1000 times an ur still not gon make it rhyme/
just take ur time cuz E's divine and ya punches never connect like adjacent lines/
^ ^THE END WAS CREATIVE


Vote………..Stanza…………

Just base off quotes stanza won. Enlighten you got some punchlines which is good, don’t
Get me wrong, some were played but some had potential too. Some of your concepts
were better than his, Just the ones that had potential were negated by weak set ups
which made them less effective. Try to make you set up’s and Your follow though line connect more.

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