I hope you don't have as many nut-huggers as Sonny Dimebags.

check

check... lets go 10

will edit verse here

i may be a couple hrs late, no net access, i was trying to write now but i got to go. sorry. edit: I forgot it was Pacific time, so I'll probably post on time... whether I do or not, you're still welcome to the extension though. good luck

it's iight, i'm having net problems myself... extented till friday

Ya wack as fuck, your lack of nice punches make the voters foam...
ya custom text says new to RV, but it didn't consider motor homes
Around the league they'll see you get clowned by feebs, this mops known...
I'll give ya girl military knowledge when I use her face as my drop zone
I don't see what your goal in this league is, I back track doubts
soon I'll KNOW what you're going for... 3-4, & DTH kicking your wack ass out
It hurts son, to notice that you're fucking terrible, but you aint the first one
You're an afterthought. & afterthought, I realized you weren't even worth one
this ain't an insult to the league, and you wont get under feebles skin
you somehow managed 3 losses, in a league there's only 3 good people in
& dude thinks he's dope, but I can come up with some flaws he hated
a sample of Black's talent is enough to make a chemist nauseated

Your weak son nothing more to it, don’t see why ppl fear’s ya
Maybe cuz feeble is untouchable.. by every women in America
So we speak on the truth, n’ you being wack n’ twisted is real talk
But feebs has finally found his loves.. within the men he stalks
You being nice is false, n’ you need to let every1 know, just confess
That ur not good n’ your steps to being dope..
…. involves a needle, belt n’ being homeless
This guy must think he’s dope, n’ AIMing people for votes
N’ seeing feeble at his best.. only shows a verse with no quotes
The word is that’s feebs has feel off, well we’ll just wait n’ see
But the drought will come to past..
… after we finish putting back the dirt on your body

I don't see what your goal in this league is, I back track doubts
soon I'll KNOW what you're going for... 3-4, & DTH kicking your wack ass out
this ain't an insult to the league, and you wont get under feebles skin
you somehow managed 3 losses, in a league there's only 3 good people in

Vs.

You being nice is false, n’ you need to let every1 know, just confess
That ur not good n’ your steps to being dope..
…. involves a needle, belt n’ being homeless

V//Feeble.

It hurts son, to notice that you're fucking terrible, but you aint the first one
You're an afterthought. & afterthought, I realized you weren't even worth one
this ain't an insult to the league, and you wont get under feebles skin
you somehow managed 3 losses, in a league there's only 3 good people in

VS

You being nice is false, n’ you need to let every1 know, just confess
That ur not good n’ your steps to being dope..
…. involves a needle, belt n’ being homeless



feebs the RV concept ive seen a couple times before which says alot
since ive only been here a couple weeks, but the after thought line
was real creative , i liked it , while the second quotable was ight,
cos i see the top heads around here speakin on that subject , while
black ya quoteable was descent as well tho i wasnt feelin most of
your verse cos i felt the concepts needed to be flipped really well
for them to work as most of them have been done,

V/feeb

Uppin over no-shows

Around the league they'll see you get clowned by feebs, this mops known...
I'll give ya girl military knowledge when I use her face as my drop zone
It hurts son, to notice that you're fucking terrible, but you aint the first one
You're an afterthought. & afterthought, I realized you weren't even worth one

vs.

nothing

.. blacks verse wasn't terrible, just didn't have any thing i thought was reaally worthy of being quoted. feebs 'afterthought' bar was the punch of the battle. i thought his 'drop zone' one was a nice flip on that sort of thing, haven't seen it done in that way before.

v/ feeble

would appreciate it if both of you voted on the punchline league final once it's up. thnx.

Ya wack as fuck, your lack of nice punches make the voters foam...
ya custom text says new to RV, but it didn't consider motor homes

vs

nothing

Nothing special here really...just one good punch from feeble but the rest wasn't really that good at all. Black came out with a nice attempt at feebs but none of his lines hit hard enough to be quoted...he needs to work on concepts n putting things together

v/ Feeble Minded

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Around the league they'll see you get clowned by feebs, this mops known...
I'll give ya girl military knowledge when I use her face as my drop zone
It hurts son, to notice that you're fucking terrible, but you aint the first one
You're an afterthought. & afterthought, I realized you weren't even worth one
this ain't an insult to the league, and you wont get under feebles skin
you somehow managed 3 losses, in a league there's only 3 good people in



vs.

The word is that’s feebs has feel off, well we’ll just wait n’ see
But the drought will come to past..
… after we finish putting back the dirt on your body


vote feeble, he pretty much dropped enough to win this. i liked the afterthought line, was worded well. other lines i quoted were solid. wtf@ the rv line tho come on now. Black dropped ok, you have a good structure man, but just didnt execute here.

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