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TillEyeDie | 0 | 0% | |
CAMROK | 5 | 100.00% | |
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02-05-04, 01:11 AM | #1 | |
xNY~NJx
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Till Eye Die vs CAMROK
IP: 244A F706
10-15 lines
due.. eh.. sometime soon, who cares doesn't matter who goes first no d/r, crew, any bullshit dont forget to check in.... this is my checkin
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02-05-04, 01:12 AM | #2 | |
PuRe AzN..
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IP: 8232 A2A8
Check..
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02-05-04, 01:21 AM | #3 | |
PuRe AzN..
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IP: 8232 A2A8
Cam Rok.. ?? Hold On Lemmie Waste This Line
Laughed So Hard I Nearly Forgot To Rhyme What The Hell You Sucha Biter You Bit Ya Name Wait It's CamRon Your Just That Close To Fame I'll Beat Ya Ass From Japan Back To New Jersey Ya Spit More Jibberish Then That Talking Furby Wait You Don't Even Speak That.. It's Worse You Talk Shit That Is Lookin Lyrically Cursed Bitch More Predicted Then Volcanoes To Burst And Ya So Dispicable That Ya Need To B Dispursed Destroyed.... Bitch Ya Out Of This System You Swinging Strikes Faster Then You Could Miss'em Yeah Im Asian To Let You Know Me Idol Is Jin This Bitch Has To Be White He Has Em In His Sig
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02-05-04, 01:28 AM | #4 | |
xNY~NJx
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IP: 244A F706
Little Asian, straight out the alleys of the Hong Kong hood
Zero chance of winning, same chance any Dynasty Soldier could If this cat gets a vote, I'm sorry, it's been rided Keepin pride, this guided missile, make this battle lop-sided Better open ur Eye-lids, cause I'm straight merkin you son Each line, like a 200 ton bomb dropin on you as you run This rhymes a pile of quick sand, better keep your feet up Can't get away, same way ur wife wants a pre-nup You'll be losing out in the end, just like you're losin this I feel sorry for those future people, who might become ur kids Listen to this shit, ever hear a japanese crack whore rap? He doesn't make sense, not consistent, talking backwards laps Till-Eye-Die, what the hell is that supposed to mean I'm shittin on ur azn pride, time to die, oops just made ur eyes bleed
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02-05-04, 02:16 AM | #5 | |||
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IP: 4577 CD9A
flow-till
punches-cam style-tie wordplay-cam personals-cam creativity-cam overall-cam til eye u had ok flow, the punches were kinda bland though, didn't really hit hard, and u didn't have many personals, u gotta use more personals. cam u had weak flow, punches were a lil more creative, and u had more personals. cuz of that..vote-cam fav lines-till Quote:
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you kno my vote, so i'm just gonna say both ya'll need to elevate. cuz these verse weren't that good. peace |
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02-05-04, 12:21 PM | #6 | |
xNY~NJx
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IP: 244A F706
Upppppppppppppinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn_(1)
Leave links, I'll return favors and check out battles.
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02-05-04, 01:57 PM | #7 | |
xNY~NJx
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IP: 244A F706
Upppppppppppinnn (2)
Yo, Vote this! drop links.... i'll check them
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02-05-04, 04:54 PM | #8 | |
Flyweight
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IP: F1B0 3239
PUNCHES-CAM
FLO-CAM CREATIVITY-CAM CLOSURE-CAM METAPHORS-CAM WHAT CAN I SAY CAM ROK TAKES IT IN EVERY CATEGORY. LIL ADVICE TO TILEYEDIE: GET OFF THE ASIAN PRIDE IT ONLY WORKZ ONCE AND JIN GOT IT. HIT THIS UP: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111056 Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - Feeble Minded
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02-05-04, 06:14 PM | #9 |
Beef=Froze
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IP: 80EF 45DD
camrok took everything ted was preety weak overall
like the person above said cut the asian pride shit alot of ur lines were corny as fuck both could work on vocab |
02-05-04, 10:02 PM | #10 | |
xNY~NJx
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IP: 244A F706
Upppppppppppppppppppiiinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn(3)
Lets see some votes
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02-05-04, 10:11 PM | #11 | |
Flyweight
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IP: C1E3 2959
I definitely think Camrok should win this one. The fact that he referenced an atom bomb destroying an Asian was a kicker because it alluded to Hiroshima really well. Can't vote yet, but would vote for camrok.
Vote on this please: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111280
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02-06-04, 12:46 AM | #12 | |
xNY~NJx
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IP: 244A F706
Yo, lets see 2 more votes... forgot to put a KO rule.. This is Up^in< #>4
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02-06-04, 12:56 AM | #13 | |
Da KiNg Of PwNaGe
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IP: D154 1BD3
Cam Rok.. ?? Hold On Lemmie Waste This Line
Laughed So Hard I Nearly Forgot To Rhyme What The Hell You Sucha Biter You Bit Ya Name Wait It's CamRon Your Just That Close To Fame weak 2 bars, no real good punches or personals I'll Beat Ya Ass From Japan Back To New Jersey Ya Spit More Jibberish Then That Talking Furby Wait You Don't Even Speak That.. It's Worse You Talk Shit That Is Lookin Lyrically Cursed whack....you mentioned a furby in a battll...tsk..tsk Bitch More Predicted Then Volcanoes To Burst And Ya So Dispicable That Ya Need To B Dispursed Destroyed.... Bitch Ya Out Of This System You Swinging Strikes Faster Then You Could Miss'em weak Yeah Im Asian To Let You Know Me Idol Is Jin This Bitch Has To Be White He Has Em In His Sig weak closer. Check Whackness Emergency Center man for battle tips Little Asian, straight out the alleys of the Hong Kong hood Zero chance of winning, same chance any Dynasty Soldier could Blah...played If this cat gets a vote, I'm sorry, it's been rided Keepin pride, this guided missile, make this battle lop-sided Better open ur Eye-lids, cause I'm straight merkin you son Each line, like a 200 ton bomb dropin on you as you run kinda weak, but ok This rhymes a pile of quick sand, better keep your feet up Can't get away, same way ur wife wants a pre-nup You'll be losing out in the end, just like you're losin this I feel sorry for those future people, who might become ur kids weak Listen to this shit, ever hear a japanese crack whore rap? He doesn't make sense, not consistent, talking backwards laps Till-Eye-Die, what the hell is that supposed to mean I'm shittin on ur azn pride, time to die, oops just made ur eyes bleed decent Camrock took this battle, TED didn't really come with anything creative, no real good punches or personals. Cam cam alright, some played Asian jokes..but he did slip a few good punches in there. Both could work on being more original and creative in their punches/personals/metas. Vote- Cam Honest votes here guys. Thanks http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112337 |
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02-06-04, 01:09 AM | #14 |
Banned: Biting
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IP: 02C8 475B
punches-cam
personal-cam creativity-barley till flow-till structure-cam -erything else-cam cam took this battle easly....eryones lines where either weak or played...but yeah vote-CAM Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. dont post twice, and your vote was crappy. read voting rules. - Feeble Minded |
02-06-04, 01:11 AM | #15 |
Banned: Biting
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IP: 02C8 475B
hit these battles up so i can start battling again and i will return an honest vote..
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111543 http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111925 |
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