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house rules
u spit 1st
g'luck

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checcin in

i found em at 2 am an thats about as good as his verse but dont go down on him on his last battle this times worse //i shouldd have his name fo my self my rimes are real diverse// im battlein u by choice u should be happy im hittin u with a line ur head starts to real sweats moist// hes gross hes a fag he lives i dont know where tryin to rap as his cool corear but he lives in fear of the day it comes out that he wares gurls underwear//bet u never would of thought a person who doesn't know u blurts out ur quer// this battle wit diverse it leeds to his deffeet theres nuttin to it im spittin my weekest verse an i rattle the streets//haha im treding water wit this son im killin u an haveing fun im half wasted im goin up an over this kid wit glue hes baseted//face it uve ben graced wit the touch of the brainstorm// they let me out and they knew a star had ben born//im hittin u like a blood sport igsamine my game but dont cry u just the next one to be put to shame im cuttin u down havin u scream in vane ur just another brutal casulity of this game//

From Beantown? got some coffee lemme finish it first
it's the only way i'll ever finish this kids endless verse
looks like his brainstorm turned into a week long shower
10 minutes spits means he can actually have an hour
This is my cue to win, i'm about to rack this herbs nerves
Don't even need a sidewalk to have your verse curbed
Your a disgrace, erase your name,delete your RB account
Can't even pay your way to success, you'll just never amount
Same birthday as me, why do i share that day with a herb
Thought about droppin a tight verse for elite but u don't deserve

came easy on this kid, don't need to shun him yet

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ok mint verse uppin for votes \\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\///////////////////////////////////////\\\\\\\\\\\////////////////

Flow: First off, Brainstorm reading your shit was down right painful.
Due to the fact that your structure was way fucked up. The
// were wack and I had to strain to identify any flow you might
of had. Diverse on the other hand, had a nice smooth flow and
a simple structure that was above all easy to read. In my mind
Diverse gets this category because his shit acctually flowed and
wasn't a pain in the ass to read.

Punches: Brainstorm was seriously lacking in this category. He had a
few punches, but they were weak and uncreative. Diverse's
punches were good and by for more creative/direct. Diverse
easily gets this.

Brainstorm: " hes gross hes a fag he lives i dont know where tryin to rap as his cool corear but he lives in fear of the day it comes out that he wares gurls underwear" He's gross?... lol, this shit was wack!

Personals: This is where Diverse really killed him. Flat out destroyed
Brainstorm, with the personals about his hometown,
his birthday, name, and the way he wrote his verse.
Brainstorm attempted to flip Diverse's name, but it
came out weak.

Diverse: " From Beantown? got some coffee lemme finish it first
it's the only way i'll ever finish this kids endless verse
looks like his brainstorm turned into a week long shower
10 minutes spits means he can actually have an hour" LOL... Nice personals.. hit too hard for Brain' to even recover

Vocab: Basic vocab from both, but of the two , Brain could use
some elevation. Nothin' to special from Diverse either, but
it really didn't matter because his shit flowed nicely.

Creativity: Great creativity from Diverse, loved the personals and the
punches were not bad either... hit hard. Brainstorm
should do as his name implies and brainstorm. Lacked any
real creativity, mostly played ideas that led to some
weak punches.

Overall: It probably doesn't need to be said, but Brain' didn't really
stand a chance. Diverse's shit wasn't complex with equisite
vocab or wordpaly, but it didn't need to be. Bottomline,
his punches and especially his personals hit hard. Not to
mention that his shit apparently flowed better and had a
simple, but nice, structure. The biggest problem for Brain'
I thought was his structure and flow. If your shit is that
hard of a read, the fact is noboby is going to want to
read it. Work on making the lines the same length, instead of
stretching them. This combined with better, more creative
punches is way more effective. Also work on including
personals, they can be the devastating to an opponent
if done right. Typical results when a newb takes on a vet.
Like I said before I cant officially vote but if I could
I would undoubtedly vote: Diverse

even though brainstorms verse was long he didnt have any good punches and it didnt flow at all
diverses verse rymed well and he had a good structure his punches wernt excellent but they were better than brainstorms
vote diverse

peep this and leave links
vs Timeless
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...d.php?p=1166316

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Ok Sorry But This Is An Easy 1.

Brainstorm, Flow Wasnt Really There, Structure Was Shit Basically. Had A Few Punches But Nothing To Shout About.

Diverse = Nice Flow By You, And Structure Was Perfect. Some Of Ya Punches Hit Hard And Vocab Was Decent.

Flow = Di
Stru = Di
Punches=di
Vocab=di
Vote =diverse

Please Return The Favour And Vote On The Battle Under My Sig. Thanks.

uppin this shit, back to the top...............................

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diverse was short and to the point without garbage. The line about an hour to write a 10 minute was good. if i could vote it would be for diverse.
Hit these up:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111280
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110315

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diverse took this one.....nice punches and metaphors...structure and flow were good
brainstorm-your shit was hard to read and didnt flow well, your punches were sketchy at best....keep workin at it..
vote-Diverse...sorry i cant post an official vote
peep these battles and drop an honest vote
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112839
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112426
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112928
thanx.

aiight.

punches
Diverse hit harder in this catergory


compared to this



diverse was conistant, whilst with brainstorm hardly had any dope [unches.

personals
diverse took this one easily



the best punch of battle!!

brainstorm had no quoteable personals.

structure
braimstorm that was the worst structure i seen in a while,
you gotta write it like diverse's
short lines,
about the same length,
an take out the '//'



flow
couldn't really catch any, in brainstorms,
diverse's was consistant, an nice.


overall
diverse took it by a long shot,
everything about his verse was just better than brainstorms, an diverse didn't really have an ill verse!!

brainstrom just keep elevating an fix your structure!!

peace

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i posted on this one earlier before i had 100 posts. like i stated before, diverse was much more concise. his punches were quicker and more personal, like about brainstorm not being able to do his flow within 10 minutes, but rather in an hour.
MY VOTE IS TO DIVERSE, specifically because brainstorm rattled on about nothing and spent too much time on it.

Hit these up:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111280
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110315

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uppin, need one more vote to get this battle closed..............

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Guess this vote will close the battle...
Diverse gets my vote...First off...Brainy ya structure was way off man...break it down by every line like Diverse did..you didn't have any real nice punches or personals...try to be more original and not come with so much played shit..like gay/sex jokes...Diverse..you did come pretty easy..but you still came with some nice punches and personals....good structure and good flow too...Diverse takes this for a harder verse with more complexity and originalaity and also harder hitting punches....Vote=Diverse

PLease drop an honest vote here guys..I took time for ya http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112786