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01-28-07, 02:23 PM | #1 | |||
I Hurt.
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LBL Championship: 1. N. Tavarez (22-5) vs. 2. Comedian (13-2)
IP: 2AC9 5FB1
Verses Due Thursday at 11:59PM Pacific 10 Line Minimum, No Line Limit Biting = Ban Feeding = -2 Votes Swaying = -2 Votes Must Vote On 4 Battles And Post Your Links Votes Due Saturday Night New Battles Up Sunday Morning For Full Rules Click Here |
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01-28-07, 03:38 PM | #2 | |||
Light Weight
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IP: 7E01 785E
sup.
20? g/l. |
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01-29-07, 09:34 AM | #3 | |||||||
the medicine man
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IP: 55F1 3980
nah type busy
16 at most |
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02-01-07, 01:10 PM | #4 | |||||||
the medicine man
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IP: 55F1 3980
i might drop 20 or more on second thought, it IS the last week of LBL
whoever drops 1st sets the limit then |
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02-01-07, 01:44 PM | #5 | |||
Light Weight
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IP: 701A 7608
24.
it's a sickening sight, i'll bring the gore when i grapple forget bloodshed... the scene will be more of a castle you're history, forgotten - you're shook in your lines, too you must have a gay past cause you like to put it behind you no one wants to go near this e-thug, we know that ya fake with an AIM list of gangstas, always seeing blocks over ya name don't even front man, and don't ever doubt the win i punched Tav, & he dropped a verse; cause i beat the crap out of him my advice: only drop the sickest lines with a dope flow forget it... that'd mean i'd end up winning by a no-show Comedian scars with stealth whenever i harm your health i will bruise and batter this mantle he's on the shelf you've got no intelligence at all... i'm the winner here i just have to take a stroll in your mind to be in the clear hispanic, mexican - the list goes on, who you tryna kid son i'd use racial disses, but i'm having trouble trying to pick one i'm honest, now that i'm here no one respects ya clown it's ironic, now that the bar is raised your rep goes down you got two careers!?! what you dropping is wack man pick yourself off the floor it's your job as the the trash man your gunplay is horrible... quit lying ya punk you always call shotgun because you tryin' ta front my writtens abuse, Comedian will diminish this dude i'll split you in half, Nelson, but the full one's my finishing move |
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02-01-07, 01:47 PM | #6 | |||||||||||
the medicine man
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IP: 55F1 3980
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Your making progress but the type that I notice is different text Cuz 'read more battles' is code for "Let me see who rhymes Im flipping next" Dog if THIS is the result, your future is bleak as fuck Improvements? ya verse is the Greatest hits of our weakest stuff! So all those bars that voters read....they'll actually be reminded Every concept you attempt is naturally Feeble Minded Fucking garbage, N.Tavarez get ate by this herb? Never Your such a nobody, U make Nicole Ritchie appreciate HERS better This kid always gets feedback when spitting, he's really fresh They hear his verse, and leave Comments to help with his shitty breath Ya girls a slut too! you'll catch her hanging where the sleezy mingle Thats why you'll always go getter.........Like the Jeezy single You know u should leave the bitch,guess love for a slut wont let you But its a shame when RV leagues is closing faster than her legs do Plus undressing chicks glance at cha body and vomit quick Wont even buy the newspaper....after watching THIS comic strip Them jeans is mad fucking tight kid, enough to scare dudes The way he rock capri son, you'd think the juice guys make fashion wear too 30 lines? this aint Cypher! Im quicker to roast this queer And you wont get the win^ Like when Nick Fletcher decides to post in there In this battle fuck a gun, you getting clipped and bruised This kid is only a Sharpshooter emulating Bret the Hitman moves Im'a treat you like a Jay album.....And leave you done U get dropped if you tryna take my Kingdom, Come BITCH!!!! |
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02-01-07, 03:22 PM | #7 | |||||||
DaTrus Is A Bitch!
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IP: F642 3A2B
Ok..
I got N.Tavarez taking this battle. Comedian only had one good bar that stood out to me. I don't think Comedian should've been in a champion battle because he is obviously not ready.. N.Tavarez's verse, the beginning had some heat, but after that it was like falling asleep because that shit got boring and had no hard hitting punches at all.. Favorite punch from each contender: Comedian: "don't even front man, and don't ever doubt the win i punched Tav, & he dropped a verse; cause i beat the crap out of him" N.Tavarez: "So all those bars that voters read....they'll actually be reminded Every concept you attempt is naturally Feeble Minded" The only reason Tavarez won this is because of the quotes he posted up and his first 3-4 bars...without those he would've lost this battle due to dropping wack. Comedian only had one good punchline that I liked, the rest where not hard hitting.. Not being a dick or hating on you two..just stating what I thought and how I felt about reading the verses. Vote - N.Tavarez |
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02-01-07, 04:45 PM | #8 | |||
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IP: 5163 CDCF
it's a sickening sight, i'll bring the gore when i grapple
forget bloodshed... the scene will be more of a castle no one wants to go near this e-thug, we know that ya fake with an AIM list of gangstas, always seeing blocks over ya name vs. So all those bars that voters read....they'll actually be reminded Every concept you attempt is naturally Feeble Minded You know u should leave the bitch,guess love for a slut wont let you But its a shame when RV leagues is closing faster than her legs do Plus undressing chicks glance at cha body and vomit quick Wont even buy the newspaper....after watching THIS comic strip In this battle fuck a gun, you getting clipped and bruised This kid is only a Sharpshooter emulating Bret the Hitman moves .. to me that "beat the crap out of u" line is played as shit. comedian didn't come that great. his opener would've worked better with something other than castle imo, but it was still fresh so i liked it. his downfall was having too many played lines. the mantle wordplay, the no show punch, raise the bar, trash man hav all been done before. n.taverez jus came with an all round better verse and takes this one easily. v/ n.taverez |
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02-01-07, 09:49 PM | #9 | ||||
Skadoosh!
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IP: 5338 849F
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^ Never have there been any truer words spoken. I'll hit this up with a vote tomorrow. Decent battle though. |
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02-01-07, 11:03 PM | #10 | ||||
Please excuse My Sickness
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IP: CCBE 9926
it's a sickening sight, i'll bring the gore when i grapple
forget bloodshed... the scene will be more of a castle vs. Your such a nobody, U make Nicole Ritchie appreciate HERS better This kid always gets feedback when spitting, he's really fresh They hear his verse, and leave Comments to help with his shitty breath Ya girls a slut too! you'll catch her hanging where the sleezy mingle Thats why you'll always go getter.........Like the Jeezy single You know u should leave the bitch,guess love for a slut wont let you But its a shame when RV leagues is closing faster than her legs do Plus undressing chicks glance at cha body and vomit quick Wont even buy the newspaper....after watching THIS comic strip Overall you could see who won This battle comedian you had alot of played concept yet aii wording but Tavarez came with some new concepts stuff i never seen before ....in the barsa highlighted .....so overall my v/ N.Tavarez
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02-02-07, 02:10 PM | #11 | |||||||
the medicine man
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IP: 55F1 3980
3-0 me
got one vote will do others later today |
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02-14-07, 08:43 AM | #12 | ||||
The Saviour
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IP: 9839 DB84
N.Tavarez wins 3-0.
N.Tavarez wins (23-5) Comedian loses (13-3) |
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