YESSIIIRRRR hot new track, base was done by Q, he wrote the chorus, im just on it, and hes on the first verse, im on the second, comments, suggestions?????

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aight peeping now...the beat is good too many sampled beats going on around....the q comes off nice...real nice.....i'mf eelin the flow by umand the delivery....lyrics are nice..i like the hoook fam u did good on that nice flow on that.....ya flow was pretty good Young..u def. got better no doubt.....keep droppin fam

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nice soulful beat. good mic presence im digging the flow from everybody. lyrics are also nice, i like the message. good shit over all. good quality.

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the beat was great. i was really feelin that. the way u guys rapped about like past experiences and shyt really fit with the beat. the chorus was bangin too! on a more personal note, Q i was likin the multis and the delivery was solid. at times it was kinda hard to understand exactly what u was sayin tho, speak clearly my nigga.
speakin of my niggaz, that nigga, i liked ur verse a lot too. i was feelin tha lyrics. sounded like some heartfelt shit. be sure to get ur flow as perfect as you can bc at times you werent exactly off beat but it sounded kinda awkward. GREAT song to both of you... keep up the good work..
dont worry about RTF bc both of u left feed on my audio... pc
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ok
sample is playin
its so beautiful, its bringin a tear to me eye

Q comes on
nice ass verse, I even rewinded it and listened to it again
dope delivery, I like the
"Back then the black kid was a bastard
but the game scouped me up and made me proud kid"

chorus
its aiigh, not smooth enough, it would've been better if it was smoother

that nigga's verse
lyrics was good. Addlibs was done poorly, they could've been better..or mixed better. too many "yeah" at random ass spots. They stick out cos they too loud.
the "get put on lyrical probation" line stuck out like a sore thumb. When I heard that I was like "ha, this nigga is just rhymin" but it was a pretty solid verse.
overall, not a bad song at all, I just wish the chorus was more smooth.
Maybe if Q would've said it, it would've sounded better, cos That Nigga made it sound kind of choppy
but, like I said, nice song
pZ

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listenin..i remembver this orginal track from Q....nice flow...lyrics dope..did u re record?...its very nice, got more emotion..turn it down a bit...i like how that nigga did the hok with Q on the sing...lyrics are nice...flow is kl..cud up the emotion a lil bur flow is nice..delivery is nice .... this isa nice track....nice to see u on the mic nigga

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aight yall, thanx fa tha feed, i figured i was a lil loud, and random at points, i may do the track over, ima think about it

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I am liking the sample choice. Q did his thing....but... vocals could be a tad higher. the beat drowns him out. The Hook is hot as hell. Hot track but...Mic levels could be tweaked. Lyrically you both did your thing I was feeling the delivary also. Overall I dug the track. Who is that singing in the backing track?