http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=233918
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=234646
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Juss a new track wit my crew S.I.C., well any feedback is 'preciated......and all feedback will be returned......

Hook - ALL
1st Verse- Black Dragon
Hook - ALL
2nd Verse - Woo
Hook - ALL
3rd Verse - Redikulous
Hook - ALL

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aiite then...

pz

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Hook was nice, but it almost got annoying right before you came in.

Black, flow was basic, but it was on none the less. Lyrics were straight.

Woo.....just sounds like it would be a weird name to call someone....lol. Flow was alright, but the delivery isn't really matching it well enough. Kinda like he's faking his hypeness. Just let go man....I can tell you got it in you. Lyrics and shit were cool though.

Redikulous....flow was probably the worst of the three. Not that it wasn't on, just was a pretty basic flow that's pretty hard to mess up....and you did in a spot or two. Delivery was kinda monotone at times even though it was in a more high pitched voice. Lyrics and shit were straight though...

Not a bad track overall....I think with a little polishing up it would be a pretty nice banger

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first link is too old post up a new one

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