lol yea, ain't record "Serious" shit in like a month and a half. and I got like 15 written tracks to record, so I thought this would be good track to get some of the rust off on. So this ain't my best shit, but hope you enjoy still yo. pc. one.

www.soundclick.com/spulakareckless

First verse: SPuL
Bridge: Chris Brown
Hook: Chris Brown
Second verse: Chris Brown
Third verse: Juelz Santana
Beat: "Run It" By Chris Brown ft. Juelz Santana

Links:
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=213730
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=213331

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your verse.
it was aiigh
nice and "poppy" like the song.
your quality though
man, it almost sounds kinda smothered.
so, it may be my speakers or it may be you. most likely its my speakers but its kind of hard to make out what you sayin.
but I can distinguish that you ARE ridin the beat and are flowin well.
I just cant make out what you're sayin.


Chris Brown's verse
yeah, my female friend always singin this song and shit and be dancin on me all the time. I dont mind the dancin, but she keeps this shit on REPEAT, nigga. I learned the words without even tryin.
But it IS kinda catchy for dude to be 16.

Juelz Santana part
my favorite part of the song. cos Im a mothafuckin dipset fan.
make it drop honey, make it pop honey
whip whop tick tock to the clock for me

doope.

so, overall, its a fairly decent track. besides your vocals soundin kinda smothered, I still enjoyed Juelz part.
its all good, nothin but love.

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Okay son........well this song is very unoriginal an played but I liked it lmao....ok I could hear what ya was saying........I can tell flow was the focus on this so lyrics aint really dat big a deal...an ya flow was def nice..u def getting better an better....u didn't do ya drags an u changed it up like 3 times thru the verse...u elevating son...delivery could been a tad more entertaining..prolly shoulda added sum hyper addlibs but asiade from that tight....stay up.......1

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^aiight thanks to both. appreciate feed. uppppp

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where did you get that g-unot shirt I want one..haha

anyway I think this track even the original is wack, your verse was cool I love your flow it has a real hippidy hop in it lol. it's good not for this style of beat though, but I still like the track I'm not a fan of dipset or even juelz at all, I'd say they're wack but you did good, I can see rust lol.

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^lol yea, thanks yo. upppp

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yo spul,

long time no speak.

man u gotta hit me up on msn and gimme some of ur secrets for mixing ur verse lol cos ur quality has improved loads

commerical type song. for some reason it seemed like u were spitting slightly too fast for the beat but flow was on point man.

anyways keep it up man

kingz

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^yea, man. I def will. I got new MSN tho yo. Forgetaboutspul@aol.com is my e-mail to add me.

but yea, thanks for feed, man. But yea, my quality improved loads mainly cuz i got a newer mic over summer. lol but appreciate feed man. pc one.

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only thing i felt like you shoulda done for your verse....

was make your delivery more animated...and made it a bit more hype...it kinda seemed like u went laid back with the delivery...and its not that type of track....shoulda just came with more excitement in the delivery..

thats my only complaint...everything else was nice

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alright i'm peepin it out now


ur verse was cool...ur flow was nice.....u had decent presense that coulda could have been upped a lil bit more...but your change ups at the end were pretty good...keep it up....of course the rest of the song is good tho

overall-7.5/10

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^aiight thanks for feed from both. uppppp.........

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