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Old 08-28-09, 03:55 AM   #1
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First photoshop attempt

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I know its shit, but if you ACTUALLY have advice on how to do this shit better feel free to speak up.

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Old 08-28-09, 03:56 AM   #2
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Old 08-28-09, 04:04 AM   #3
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start by making the name of the artist actually readible
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Old 08-28-09, 04:09 AM   #4
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can you honestly not read it? or you just being ya typical hating self?
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Old 08-28-09, 05:01 AM   #5
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quick change.

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Old 08-28-09, 06:00 AM   #6
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this threads turning into my personal test thead.


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Old 08-28-09, 06:51 AM   #7
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i honestly couldn't read it. But after realising what i was supposed to say, I was able to make it out in the first pic.

And i'm not a hater, you posted a vid of a freestyle that I thought was wack, and then I told you I thought it was wack...
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Old 08-28-09, 05:35 PM   #8
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video? Im talking about this photoshop shit, who cares what you thought a the video you cant rap yourself so yeh....
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Old 08-28-09, 07:28 PM   #9
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heres my thoughts when i first see the photo

your photoshoppin isn't horrible, the name is incrediably diffucult to read becuase with the way the font is set, it makes for longer curvier letters, but because you have letters crossing, it makes it looked jumbled.


the photo is really bland dude, just a picture of a studio with someone standing in it, prob yourself, im guessing? kinda of basic like...blah. nothing speical about a studio.

i think you need to be more creative with the actually photo to make your photoshop stand out more.

but thats just me.
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Old 08-28-09, 08:03 PM   #10
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Thanks. Appreciatte the honest input.
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video? Im talking about this photoshop shit, who cares what you thought a the video you cant rap yourself so yeh....


uh buddy, anyone can rap, it's just some are good and some aren't, plus you haven't heard anything from me that wasnt recorded in one take, written in 15 mins, and is a year old. So we can battle anytime you want, i'll write a verse in 30 mins, record it in one take in my apartment living room with my shitty microphone, I won't mix it, and you'll get ripped to pieces

you wanna say my "normal hater self" that obviously means I must have hated before for the behaviour to be considered "normal". In that case what other example were you reffering to besides this? Only time I cared enough to give you negative feed was on that video

You're not so bright man

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Old 08-28-09, 08:44 PM   #12
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...the font is terrible....the stay tuned and the straight jacket especially....n the name on top i def couldnt read...i guess u were goin for a grainy look?cuz thats what it looked like...ehh
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wasnt really going for a specific look, just fucking with photoshop to see what i could create. but yeh, thanks.
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Old 08-28-09, 09:14 PM   #14
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uh buddy, anyone can rap, it's just some are good and some aren't, plus you haven't heard anything from me that wasnt recorded in one take, written in 15 mins, and is a year old. So we can battle anytime you want, i'll write a verse in 30 mins, record it in one take in my apartment living room with my shitty microphone, I won't mix it, and you'll get ripped to pieces

you wanna say my "normal hater self" that obviously means I must have hated before for the behaviour to be considered "normal". In that case what other example were you reffering to besides this? Only time I cared enough to give you negative feed was on that video

You're not so bright man


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2 tell ya the truth man, i think the third one's 'name' of your album looks the based, its easy to read and straight to the point. I just think that the rest of the cover is still a little bland.

i hadn't even noticed you were in a straight jacket until it was mentioned up top, becuase its so focused on the studio board, i'd def keep the name and the way you've done your name on the cover, but ditch that studio board and try and go a different direction to draw in peoples eye's more and connect more like....when you see a stuido, you dont associate it with a straight jacket, thats why i didn't see the connection or even the 'little things' liek the straight jacket.

again, just my 2 cents.
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