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Old 11-26-06, 12:19 PM   #1
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19. Flagrant (0-0) vs 20. uncle phil (0-0)

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Old 11-26-06, 01:58 PM   #2
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Old 11-27-06, 05:15 AM   #3
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wanna drop early? ill drop tonite tommorow
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Old 11-27-06, 02:50 PM   #4
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cool, i'll probably drop tonight
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Old 11-27-06, 05:17 PM   #5
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decided to peep ya shit on BW, jus to get a little sneek-peek
n' found out glocks isnt the only one battlin a comedian this week
every battle a new scrub-at-text, im gettin sick of the bullshit
im kemp doin a mag jus postin somethin so ppl dont get dissapointed
my fams rich so when it all parts im expectin loads of gifts
your uncle phil, the only will you'll recieve has the last name smith
n its true ya girls a freak for others, you might find it indescent
how she holds her chest for flag, without a pledge of allegiance
you AINT gangsta or a hustla, so dont front like u let the shells blow
if you did push the rock.. you'd be slammed n set 4 the peoples elbow
^so if dood actin thug you no there still aint need to budge ...
cuz we all know that uncle phil only bangs hammers cuz he plays a judge
we just signed in so are ranks suck, but thats where your flow stops
witta verse lookin like your tryna stay 20.. like old chicks wit botox

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Old 11-29-06, 08:09 AM   #6
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your gay kid, predicted to win.. hah but i dont hate you
coz if i take n L off flag... your still gay dood
FAG.. you suck, madden line was wack n got sad n gushy
so even if u eat me dog, that just proves that i'm notta pussy
you gettin killed bitch... tryin to tarnish my status? it's shinin
so when I leave FL MIA you'll need more then n atlus to find him
Your broke, so I made this name just for you be thankful pal
coz this as close as you'll ever get to a big banks account
This is the first & last time we'll battle.. in the end, you dyin, it's tragic
Next time anyone sees you facin UP.. you'll be inside of your casket
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Old 11-30-06, 05:24 AM   #7
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n its true ya girls a freak for others, you might find it indescent
how she holds her chest for flag, without a pledge of allegiance
you AINT gangsta or a hustla, so dont front like u let the shells blow
if you did push the rock.. you'd be slammed n set 4 the peoples elbow

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your gay kid, predicted to win.. hah but i dont hate you
coz if i take n L off flag... your still gay dood
FAG.. you suck, madden line was wack n got sad n gushy
so even if u eat me dog, that just proves that i'm notta pussy
Your broke, so I made this name just for you be thankful pal
coz this as close as you'll ever get to a big banks account


This was a pretty decent battle. Both had cool verses with some nice lines, and although gay lines are played, the ones I quoted from phil were original and fucking funny. He had just one more quotable and overall his verse was more enjoyable to read.

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Old 11-30-06, 11:25 AM   #8
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I'm going with Phil...


Pledge was a cool self-nameplay... The judge line was decent, but it could have hit harder with better wording. Aside from those two, nothing really stood out. Phil could have worded his stuff a lot better cause he had some nice concepts. The flag line was decent, but could have it a lot harder cause it was a really nice concept. I liked the pussy line, you flipped it well. And the big banks self-nameplay was fresh. The casket closer is kind'a played, but I liked the way you put it.


Soooooooooooo, uncle phil gets my vote.
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Old 11-30-06, 08:25 PM   #9
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lol
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thnx 4 da votes
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Old 12-01-06, 04:34 PM   #10
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my fams rich so when it all parts im expectin loads of gifts
your uncle phil, the only will you'll recieve has the last name smith
COOL

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you gettin killed bitch... tryin to tarnish my status? it's shinin
so when I leave FL MIA you'll need more then n atlus to find him
NICE SHIT MAN
Your broke, so I made this name just for you be thankful pal
coz this as close as you'll ever get to a big banks account
THAT WAS OK


V/Phil

I personally expected more from both. It ended up bein a weird battle were both guys used they own name for punches but Phil had the most quotes and the best line of the battle with that atlas thing
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Old 12-01-06, 06:55 PM   #11
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flagrant

you AINT gangsta or a hustla, so dont front like u let the shells blow
if you did push the rock.. you'd be slammed n set 4 the peoples elbow
^so if dood actin thug you no there still aint need to budge ...
cuz we all know that uncle phil only bangs hammers cuz he plays a judge


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uncle phil

your gay kid, predicted to win.. hah but i dont hate you
coz if i take n L off flag... your still gay dood

you gettin killed bitch... tryin to tarnish my status? it's shinin
so when I leave FL MIA you'll need more then n atlus to find him

This is the first & last time we'll battle.. in the end, you dyin, it's tragic
Next time anyone sees you facin UP.. you'll be inside of your casket

ya i thought this was a pretty close mathc flag came pretty nice...had some nice quotables ..i seen uncle phil on braggin writes and is pretty nice...good battle but for more quotables

vote-uncle phil
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Old 12-01-06, 09:27 PM   #12
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Nothing

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you gettin killed bitch... tryin to tarnish my status? it's shinin
so when I leave FL MIA you'll need more then n atlus to find him

Overall This battle was very one sided and very disappointing to read but anyways this one bar is what stood out to me so my vote goes to

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Old 12-01-06, 09:59 PM   #13
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n its true ya girls a freak for others, you might find it indescent
how she holds her chest for flag, without a pledge of allegiance
you AINT gangsta or a hustla, so dont front like u let the shells blow
if you did push the rock.. you'd be slammed n set 4 the peoples elbow
^so if dood actin thug you no there still aint need to budge ...
cuz we all know that uncle phil only bangs hammers cuz he plays a judge

vs.

your gay kid, predicted to win.. hah but i dont hate you
coz if i take n L off flag... your still gay dood
you gettin killed bitch... tryin to tarnish my status? it's shinin
so when I leave FL MIA you'll need more then n atlus to find him
This is the first & last time we'll battle.. in the end, you dyin, it's tragic
Next time anyone sees you facin UP.. you'll be inside of your casket

hmm, I got this tied up. I liked flags concepts, tha plegde, tha judge, tha elbow line. unc came wit some funny shit tho. I think that if phil dropped 14 like flag he woulda edged it but I'm gonna go with flag on this one.

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Old 12-02-06, 07:17 AM   #14
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Old 12-02-06, 10:04 AM   #15
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this was imo the best battle of the week cause both came real decent but im a go with flagrant because i enjoyed his overall verse more his punches ta me just hit harder so

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