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Old 11-26-06, 12:21 PM   #1
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7. Stanza (7-10) vs 8. Erel Avent (11-4)

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Old 11-26-06, 03:09 PM   #2
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Old 11-26-06, 09:42 PM   #3
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ok you go ahead and drop 30 if you want .....ill do Less I dont have time for all of that
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Old 11-29-06, 09:35 AM   #4
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I Must admit I can see that you are on the top of your game dude
....That must explain the FUBU footprints on the top of your PS2
Man I could say youve elevated bcuz I see you went from Rags to cloths
Dog ill Treat your lyrics like whores...Cuz they only get trashed & Tossed
Why should I even bother..you a Tonka Toy They call me a Army Truck
I Knew You was wack and old
......When you Noshowed To untold when his sig was tellin you to STFU !
Even Though i aint singing lets speak on that note while im at Yo door
bcuz you spose to be 11-5 from there...how the fuck is it only four
The Untold vs. Erel Battle

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Originally Posted by DatrusHurtz
hahahaha, I knew this shit would happen. It Looks like I ended this faggots career


Damn Trus I hate to say it but the fag is back But ill end his shit here
bcuz He only came back Bcuz he missed the butplugs and cum in his ear
Back to the bitch of the minute what the fuck do you want Erel Whore
Your Like Lampejo's Sig..Full of accomplishments that noones ever seen before
Not a Diss to Lampejo !
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Erel Avent: Aeon, Miles, Sincere Passion, Unregistered User, Danny Glover, Barney Rubble, Infinite Flow, Poizen Ink, Rhode, KingHorrible, Kid Methodz, Father Nature, Leaf, Magnum PI, Alwordz Write, T0p NotcH, Gzus.... who else knows?

Yeah I read your interview with kempo and You said that truths wouldnt win
Are those really all your alias...or jus nigga's you fucked while in the pin
You related to Ying Yang Bcuz your ass is def Out of your chemical element
why would I Lie about you being gay
................when i have proof of you being the most Irrelavent
CLICK HERE LOL
they predicted that you would win..too bad none of this niggas Mrs. Cleo
you might wanna check out this battle
............considering the fact that you shoot fire out your piss hole
So lets end this shit man im like Trus..im putting ya Career on the Shelf
i knew you wasnt worthe my time when you admitted to biting Yourself !!!
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Erel Avent: as far as the biting accusations. it happened on Hype when I had another name in the HW title match against myself (ive done it three times) but didnt feel like writing & this other name was gaining alot of "fame" and i didnt wanna uphold it so I bite Lord Omni Sicc THEN linked LOS to the battle on AIM...he then pointed it out & had the name banned. Vex did a IP search and it came back as MINE..so I was accused of biting...but the thing is I bite against myself, then told on myself.
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Old 11-29-06, 08:16 PM   #5
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You flip your first two concepts.
use a cum line, diss Lamp then apologize
link to 3 gay fags.. quote alot bullshit & I cant believe my eyes
ur ranked #7, where's all the dope heads? i guess none's left
so excuss me for rippin this fuckin Stanza like common or mos def
you see i do this with ease, it's to bad for you we had to collide
cause your gettin ate like chicken noodle soup with a soda on the side
& after lookin at the ranking, i understand why your mad
7-10 against 11-4 .. jesus christ I'm just as good as you are bad
the victory is mine, your not worth the effort bitch
and why dont you HTML this since you like quotin shit

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Old 11-30-06, 05:19 AM   #6
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I Must admit I can see that you are on the top of your game dude
....That must explain the FUBU footprints on the top of your PS2
You related to Ying Yang Bcuz your ass is def Out of your chemical element
why would I Lie about you being gay
................when i have proof of you being the most Irrelavent
So lets end this shit man im like Trus..im putting ya Career on the Shelf
i knew you wasnt worthe my time when you admitted to biting Yourself !!!

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& after lookin at the ranking, i understand why your mad
7-10 against 11-4 .. jesus christ I'm just as good as you are bad
the victory is mine, your not worth the effort bitch
and why dont you HTML this since you like quotin shit


I'm going to vote for Stanza... I think the fact that he went so many lines helped him out because it gave him more quantity for a few more decent bars. Those bars I quoted of his were pretty cool, they need better wording to be raw, but I think they were good enough for me to quote based on the quality of this battle. Erel, you should've dropped more. That is what let you down. I would've quoted 3 bars from you, because I liked the opener... but the fact is you fed off his verse to do that which is gay and against the rules.

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Old 11-30-06, 09:22 AM   #7
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Thanx Nick i Appreciate that vote ...I will be voting on all open battles this week but i will not be posting but i will vote though
uppin for more votes
im up 1-0
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Old 12-01-06, 12:59 PM   #8
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stop uppin it bitch they will vote god damn.
up it one more time & your gonna get vote deducted homo.
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Old 12-01-06, 04:04 PM   #9
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I Must admit I can see that you are on the top of your game dude
....That must explain the FUBU footprints on the top of your PS2
^ON TOP OF YUR GAME/FOOTPRINTS REFERENCES ARE VERY PLAYED BUT THE FUBU THING WITH IT WAS A NICE FLIP ON AN OLD CONCEPT SAYIN HE WEARS PLAYED SHIT
Damn Trus I hate to say it but the fag is back But ill end his shit here
bcuz He only came back Bcuz he missed the butplugs and cum in his ear
^LOL
Back to the bitch of the minute what the fuck do you want Erel Whore
Your Like Lampejo's Sig..Full of accomplishments that noones ever seen before
^OK
So lets end this shit man im like Trus..im putting ya Career on the Shelf
i knew you wasnt worthe my time when you admitted to biting Yourself !!!
^OUCH!


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You flip your first two concepts.
use a cum line, diss Lamp then apologize
link to 3 gay fags.. quote alot bullshit & I cant believe my eyes
DECENT RESPONCE,NOT GREAT BUT DECENT
& after lookin at the ranking, i understand why your mad
7-10 against 11-4 .. jesus christ I'm just as good as you are bad
^I LIKE THE HUMOR BEHIND THAT ONE




V/Stanza

he just had more stuff. Erel shoulda matched his lines but it's like he didn't take him serious E-nuff to do so. Stanza seem like the hungrier Mc here.
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Old 12-01-06, 05:06 PM   #10
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So lets end this shit man im like Trus..im putting ya Career on the Shelf
i knew you wasnt worthe my time when you admitted to biting Yourself !!!

vs.

the victory is mine, your not worth the effort bitch
and why dont you HTML this since you like quotin shit


i wasn't really feeling this battle. stanza: i've seen the 'top of your game' thing used in a similar way before, and i never really felt it anyway. i like how you came more personal in your verse, but most of your lines were lacking execution. the 'lie about you being gay' line had potential, but i felt the rhyme was forced, and could've been a lot harsher. erel event: i don't know how you can drop half the lines he did, and even feed in two of your punches. your opener was structured all weird, and then you had shit that was wtf like your 'ate like chicken noodle soup'. your closer was a cool feed tho.


v/ Stanza. i'm edging this to him for coming more personal.
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Old 12-01-06, 05:36 PM   #11
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So lets end this shit man im like Trus..im putting ya Career on the Shelf
i knew you wasnt worthe my time when you admitted to biting Yourself !!!

vs.

the victory is mine, your not worth the effort bitch
and why dont you HTML this since you like quotin shit

this battle was meh, stanza verse was long with nothing really in it except that line n' the other guys verse wasn't that good either so it's 1 bar vs. 1 bar lol, but stanza edged this 1 out

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Old 12-01-06, 06:51 PM   #12
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stanza


Why should I even bother..you a Tonka Toy They call me a Army Truck
I Knew You was wack and old
......When you Noshowed To untold when his sig was tellin you to STFU !



So lets end this shit man im like Trus..im putting ya Career on the Shelf
i knew you wasnt worthe my time when you admitted to biting Yourself !!!



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erel avent


the victory is mine, your not worth the effort bitch
and why dont you HTML this since you like quotin shit


not a good bad stanza took this alittle more personal in this battle....stanza seem like he cared more then erel

vote-stanza
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Old 12-02-06, 07:16 AM   #13
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Old 12-02-06, 09:53 AM   #14
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stanza most def took this he came with better punches and he use mutch mor creativity in his verse and avent came a bit to simple ta take the win so.....

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Old 12-03-06, 02:00 AM   #15
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LoL i just hope stanza comes on and voates...
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