i was kidding about the whole suicidal thing of course...but seriously idc about wining and loosing.

i just care about sweaty pits.

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Mystic, you had a personal punch but I felt that the world choice that you picked wasn't very creative. However, the 1st line connected to the 2nd line very well...


DJ-SYDM, the wordplay & creativity was done a little better. Even though the concept has been used before, you executed the punch better..


Vote - DJ-Sydm

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Mystic (Traitor)

thanks for the feed and vote.

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nice punch dj that was one of the best so far

mystic yours was forced like you rushed it and aint read it back to yourself

vote- DJ

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I wont even ASK.Y you rap, cuz ya shits extinct like a MAMOUTH
Matta fact,DJ how bout you listen ta ya own name
.................................................. .............and SHUT YO' DAMN MOUTH!

1st line: flow aight and decent set up.. sorda a punch to as-well...
2ed line: aight flow.. a bit personal but lacking impack on the punch and sorda force as-well mamouth and danm mouth dont really flow good but then again every punch dont have to rhyme as-long as it connects good which this one didnt really connect that good...


Mys' can't stic a punch, Nobody wants to see me in a 'bout with him'
cause if he lasts more than a second its cause the ref had to count to 10!

1st line: a bit of word-play and a aight flow decent set up...
2ed line: flow aight a bit more creative and decent punch not the hardest punch but a decent one that hit harder...


winner: dj

thnx...........................

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Vote: DJ

/Mystic biting my Ask Y idea = gay.



Word.

Meh, who cares, shit was filler

lol

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it was sorda the same concept but it wasnt the whole bar itself so its not concider biting but a lack of creativeness...

either way he still lost thou....

Word, mine was better. :coo:

^^ word...... way better.....

Mystic, just wasn't feelin' urs, felt like the wit wasn't there. DJ's was nice, he got this one.

Vote - DJ

v/ DJ... mystics punch was too simple, dj's was decent, not really hard hitting, but mys had nothing, so

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i did use the same concept, but it wasn't the focus of my punch. it was used in diff. terms. and f.oo we were supposed to be lovers.

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