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05-26-07, 06:31 PM | #9 | ||
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JAY 3RD
dawg u pose to be booted so appreciate ya stay// leave u like ya avatar but i'll Tuck ya feet away// Lol, I like the personal on the avy, nice fill u wit belly wit cement and watch u eat the pave// Evidence? please i'm like the Bulls i throw the Heat Away// Wording In the setup was shit…decent punch and i'll stab u wit the pencil just watch ya flow-leak// and my level too high dawg you'll catch a nose-bleed// Played 0-1? that aint a battle record, thaz score for girls numbers// ugly ass bitch couldnt win a beauty contest for plumbers// No….This was Shitt i roll wit BTR kid and we straight smoke u wack herbs// only friends u got is when u type in ya password// ….Nothing complex, and no direction at all and u got an LP big whoop u still cant see me// first thing i thought was "only a faggot rhymes the name of they Cd"// Wasn’t a strong closer…Not creative enough for n/p… PHIL you write simple lines, i can tell text ain't for you dumb bitch your way out of ya league jay...the audio one is the forum above this Hahaha, this was a decent personal…wording could be better though i'll kidnapp an murder you, so any shots you send won't harm me when i leave you mia, there wont be any sun, beachs or palm trees Naw, im not feelin this your an easy win for us, cuz nuthin you spit is near dope i'll roll up on the jay, spark'em, ...then pass'em around for the whole league too smoke Who’s us? What are you venom? Lol…And this bar is 1000 times played, lol…The J/weed/joint thing is hella over used weak structure an played punchs, your verse's just suck dude i haven't seen so many slashes on one body..since the last time i cut you Wording was to stretched in the main punch you'll get the one banger, my hands heaver than bricks i'll hit'em wit sucha second round KO..canibus asked me to do the remix Naw, not to mention the wording in the first line was bad i'm too fast to hit, so you can throw fist's wit rage cause my face'll get less hit's than ya soundclick page PLAYED PUNCH! Man are soundclick punches played… Overall: I think Phil has more talent battle wise, but he came very played in this battle and lacked any real creativity that stayed consistent. Jay had a good and decent bar, but then a played and a couple wack ones. So this battle actually ends up being close, but I think for being less played, I have to give it to Jay 3rd… |
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