Checkin by Wednesday Oct. 6th

Verses due by FRIDAY OCTOBER 8TH, 2010. I need both of your to paypal account addresses...


Battle Closes Sunday Night or Monday (Oct. 10 or 11th) Morning depending on how the votes go.

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Checking in. Good luck.

check check check check check

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This sites gone dry but this loner will be here 'til the end,
I mean Cola's always refreshing...this site trying to make friends.

oops, dude, rofl, i totally forgot about this...


give me a minute and i'll drop something

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Im straight to the facts, and bitch i'll always fight to the final bell
This going to a round three, cuz Red's name always followed by two L's


word son, good luck...was fun tourney

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Cola:
I understand what cola was trying to do but the thing is, his name is followed by BU and then LL, regardless it still kind of works because it's eventually followed by two L's but the thing is, i've seen these kind of punches used so many times. I told some kid "you're new to this site we can have a rematch ill start you off with two L's like a Llama" some shit like that with actual structure and rhymed. And i've seen so many other variations but I was still kinda feeling it but all those factors took away from it.

Red Bull:
Fuck you. Lol just kidding I think you're good looking. I'm going to go out on a limb here and claim that the "refresh" wordplay has probably been done a million times, however I've never seen it done before personally, or probably have but was baked and don't remember... So if it was ever used before it was used on different sites cuz ive never seen it here and I don't go to other sites so in the end it has an original feel to it, but not a crazy original feel. Regardless I enjoyed the wordplay, the rhyme scheme was a lot simpler then your other ones you've used in past punches but that was ok because it had a little comedy to it and made me smile. Overall good punch

Nice drops by both of you and I do feel this battle was actually better then last weeks, congrats on getting to the champ match both

v/ red bull

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and since I voted you both owe me a sucky sucky along with your mothers, sisters, aunts and/or neises

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RedBull you came good again(PAUSE)this week with a solid punch, everything was good it worked, structure, flow ......... It's what i expected it to be.

Cola, you deff stepped your shit way up sence last week, Punch was good and honestly I dont think anything about it is played(I don't know what JTR talkin bout). Flow was on and was worded good. Overall U imporved from round one and due to that I think you came out with this one.


V/ Cola

Of course you don't know what JTR is talking about. I used the same concept in a line in my battle against SPUL where Cola actually criticized it and called it played.

Silly ass kids.

Incorrect.

Look at the last battle when somebody voted for me and I told them they still didn't get it.

It's herbs like you that ruined all activity here.

Herbs like me? Get off my dick and quit crying about stupid shit, MOVE ON.

btw It's herbs like YOU why people don't vote!

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up and away!

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