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02-17-04, 11:22 PM
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A.K.A Mischief Since '00.
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First Attempts...
IP: B20E EBF9
Yo These are My First Two Attempts At Creating Beats From Scratch...
Give Me Feedback and Pointers... In my Opinion 2 is better than 1... LaB BeatZ
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02-17-04, 11:27 PM
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Kung Fu
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IP: 3EBB BEAF
Beat 1 - not bad for first beat, sounds kinda empty tho, like it needs something, sequence wise, you sound like you know where things go and everything, so keep up the good work
Beat 2 - yea your right this one is better than the first, your improving , this one feels less empty, could use a nice bassline and would be better. Kepp up the progress. hit my new beat up please http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=115098 |
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02-18-04, 02:24 AM
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IP: 658C 12B2
Hmmmm...
 Beat 1 The Strings Are Kinda Irritating, But Its Aight... The Drums Should Be A Little Louder, And Incorporate A Harder Snare... The Shaker Is Nice...And So Is That JazzyRhodes Piano Thing... Other Than That...The Beat Is Kinda...Bland...Needs A Little... Beat 2 Ahhh...Its A Little Too Slow...Speed It Up A Little...Maybe, 100 BPM... Once Again, Make The Drumline Louder, And Make The Snare More Hard... Also, Add A Bassline...Better Than Your First, But Still A Little Empty... You've Got Potential, And Once You Really Grasp This, You'll Do Fine... |
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02-18-04, 07:11 PM
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A.K.A Mischief Since '00.
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IP: B20E EBF9
Thank Ya Thank Ya....
I agree Beat 1 is missing something, but i got new sounds so i'll jazz it up..lol And Beat 2 is slower... But i'll fix it  More feedback appriciated.
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