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07-11-07, 03:42 AM
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On The Air - COMIN JAN 07
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One Life To Live
IP: BB78 D6B4
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/son...&songID=5543354
check it out let me know what you think it's going on my new cd "THE COME UP" ------- Links ======== http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=243194 ======== http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=243072 ======== |
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07-11-07, 09:49 AM
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O.wning Y.ou D.aily
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IP: A0F9 438C
Word.....I'm guessing you're using that AKG Perception 200 cause your voice sounds crisp as hell man. I like the whole feel of this track man. Flow and everything is perfect. Hook sounded like you slipped in the beginning but I think its just the change in the cadence from the verse to the hook that made me think that. Hook's nice though man. You got the beginnings of a really nice track here man. Good shit
 And yes, we do need to be doing tracks together....lol
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07-11-07, 04:02 PM
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-BTR-
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IP: 2B02 4E7F
it actually sounds pretty good..
...at times it sounds like u have a lisp so its kinda hard to make clear of what youre saying..but the flow is cool..quality definitely sounds much better. hook is cool..real simple. i like this hit me up..maybe i can get on it... |
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07-29-07, 09:47 AM
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On The Air - COMIN JAN 07
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IP: BB78 D6B4
lol ahha i didn't even read the feedback on this
thanks though I appreciate it |
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07-31-07, 02:34 AM
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~Spitten Fire~
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IP: 2E2A ED07
yo fam feelin' this track man.....ya lyrics on this is strate....crispy clean quality....keep droppen fam.....i really can't critique much...aiite man....
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07-31-07, 06:48 AM
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Must not Sleep; Must Warn Others
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IP: A52E FBE3
This shit really is fuckin hot! haha.
Beat is fuckin sick, quality is an A+, lyrics/flow are perfect for the beat; all in all, you killed this shit. You should just get someone to hop on it because it's a little short. EDIT: My bad, didn't see that it was a preview. |
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07-31-07, 04:40 PM
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I don't lose
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IP: 497E 3C35
good ole PT skills like a rollercoaster.....you on the come up then back down.....
example - the first verse flow/lyrics on point....like woah on point.....emotion delivery, kinda monotonous....n in the hook you start to pick it up....work on ya influctions in ya voice.....it will make your real lyrics seem real for your life.....thats the only advice i can give on this.....potential on this one....its on the way dont let it slip back down
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 well i thought about the army
dad said, son you're fucking high and i thought, yeah there's a first for everything so i took my old man's advice three sad semesters it was only fifteen grand spent in bed i thought about the army i dropped out and joined a band instead  |
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07-31-07, 04:40 PM
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I don't lose
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IP: 497E 3C35
check out the shit i did with tony self, help another brotha advance too
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well i thought about the army
dad said, son you're fucking high and i thought, yeah there's a first for everything so i took my old man's advice three sad semesters it was only fifteen grand spent in bed i thought about the army i dropped out and joined a band instead |
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08-01-07, 10:45 PM
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Savage For My Cabbage
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IP: 819D F1E5
1st verse- i like the flow with the beat it rolss thru real smooth sounds like the high end on your vocals are set a lil high..
Hook- shit is catchy reminds me of some old nas typ shit.. umm well i was waitin for more but thits it lol.. should make it longer or throw me on that shit haha.. slappp id give it a 9/10
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08-04-07, 04:42 PM
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Sam Dope
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IP: 3080 CD66
UH OH I see the new mic is working out for ya man..Quality is perfection. I'm really feeling the vibe of this track..Lyrics were on some real shit and flow was smooth as ever. I like how you kept the hook pretty simple as well..Also your energy level throughout the song fit perfectly..I can't really find anything wrong with this track, I just wish that it was longer..REMIX?!?!?! haha get at me son
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08-08-07, 12:05 AM
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10:23 till i'm 86
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IP: 5C45 839C
ya, diggin the hook, finish this boi up for sure
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08-22-07, 07:44 AM
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I have a lot to learn...
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IP: 3223 240D
I wasn't really feeling the verse, but the hook and beat were good. Your vocals didn't seem engaging or something, I don't know -_-. It's not that they were bad, they were good, just not dope.
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08-23-07, 09:18 AM
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Light Weight
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IP: 6D46 24BF
that song is so inspiring, it makes me wanna do something nice to see em smile. ur flow was straight too. it kinda sounded like a freestyle to me but it was crazy nice, hope u get signed...
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and youngins say that i should dumb down my wordplay/ y'all ball, i just sign lines and let the words play/ DRAMA GANG established 2005MY MUSIC. CONSTANTLY UPDATED!!!! http://www.soundclick.com/bands/default.cfm?bandID=527460 |
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08-28-07, 12:18 AM
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Semper Fi
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IP: 1921 4445
Intro was nice. Couldnt have done better
Verse1: Feeling the verse. Good vocab and the voice was on point Hook: Scared me abit when i heard the sudden boost in volume. all smoothed and mellowed out then bam. But the chorus was on point Overall for what is there I give it about a 7.5 I hope to hear the completeed version.
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08-31-07, 07:55 PM
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New to RV
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IP: D7BC BACA
Verse 1:
Flow is nice, I hear a lot of internal rhyme but the thing that you have to do is learn how to infect people with your voice. The first thing people hear when you start spittin is your voice and if you don't grab em with it then it makes them not want to listen. Hook I defintely like the hook it fits the mood of the track kinda somber but at the same time you hit it with more force than the verse.. the verse should have been spit just like that hook 7/10 good shit though RTF |
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