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05-10-05, 09:43 PM
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I can't believe
IP: 6187 5CD4
I can't believe all that we put together can collaspe like this
I can't believe the times we spent won't be missed, I can't believe the way i feel like u stabbed me in the heart I can't believe that your down the street and you feel a whole world apart I can't believe you fell out of love with me what did i do? I can't believe i introduced you 2 my grand parents and they like you I can't believe all the feelings i have are still here I can't believe you said i didn't make you happy how is this fair? I can't believe you will ever find anyone that brings you joy like me I can't believe you will never wake up again in the same bed next 2 me I can't believe all of the things that we went thru But worst of all I can't believe that i'm not with you............ Dedicated to Tai, i love you girl. But its not worth it if your not happy. Be easy baby |
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05-10-05, 09:53 PM
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IP: 6B57 AB34
this is nice and deep, im feelin it..
7.5/10
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05-11-05, 09:48 AM
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IP: D0A3 C3B6
nice emotion. mos definately. i felt u could've gone w/o saying I cant believe in every line. but it was aiight. keep up the good work
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