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Old 02-02-08, 11:55 AM   #1
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Arrow Over-eager...new joint...holla

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overeagerfinal.mp3 - 2.72MB



**I'm still getting over a sore throat here...So, my vocals might sound different because of my scratchy voice...I just wanted to finally spit something instead of sitting around...Plus, I hate a lot on my chest I had to get off...


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Old 02-03-08, 04:44 PM   #2
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Dude, this track has so much potential. I think if you mixed that hook a little better it coulda banged instead of sounded annoying at times. I think you shoulda lowered your vocals as well cause they overpower the beat to me. Other than that, solid track man
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Old 02-03-08, 09:55 PM   #3
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damn bro... you elevated like hell since I last heard you... you edit your tracks a lot better.. flow is fckin on point and lyrics just crazy... but wasnt feelin the dubs you had on the left side on the ear.. Chorus is pretty catchy.. but dang bro just lovin it!! keep it up Q! still have same aim?
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Old 02-11-08, 09:32 PM   #4
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Old 02-17-08, 02:05 AM   #5
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This sounds pretty good. It sounds like you have a lot of highs in your vocals. It sounds kind of muffly. Turn down your mic when you record a little bet. Try mixing around 640 hz. See how that helps. Sounds a little choppy in some parts. Flow is on beat but you gotta draw me in this a little bit more. Lyrically your fine. But do something that'll draw me in more. Change up a little bit.
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Old 03-02-08, 07:01 PM   #6
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I liked this joint... weird that im on here again haha. was just seeing what was up with you guys

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i think this beat is really tight. The first verse was pretty decent. i think at times you let the lyrics compromise your flow, but overall pretty solid. i was vibin to it.. i liked it =). my fav of your joints though was that killer convictions joint me you and shear did like 2 years ago haha. your flow in that shit was pretty redic..

anyways bruh, stay up and keep doin you
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Old 03-03-08, 12:59 PM   #7
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damn!...that beat.....is ...crack!!!!!! the flow on it...wow... kinda sounds like sumn my man UG with spit to a beat like that (Cella Dwellas in case you were wondering who UG was...) anyways... this joint coul be a killer if it were cleaned up a lil bit... lower ya adlibs... they were kinda loud... i agree with whoever said ya vocals had a lot of highs in it... but overall... this is a head nodder for realz... good shyt muh nuk nuk!
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