you red da rules you spit first, and you got 20 min.

yup...i'll start keyin...20 bars..thats fucked...

i said ten bars!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

only 10 lines max.............
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Yung thug can't spell young must be handicap or illiterate
Expecting me to drop 20 bars..now hes fuckin just inconsiderate
I'm from the 619..yeah right..can't you tell that was sarcastic
Dirty Jew..i'm hitler..an i got 20 minutes to prepare a casket
Fuck'a newb..an fuck me too..for wastin time battlen you
I'ma go used..and say..
the only way you spit sick..is if your saliva had the flu
I'll murder this kid..leave em merked..in a history book..
A page essay..(this batte) on why he got lyrically shooked
You left me under rated..you got more posts..but ya L's invaded
Went up..like a elavater..with kids in it..started tobe exscalated
I'm half way there..to the point i can stop wasten my breath
20 lines..20 minutes..
For fuck sakes.you have one big ego..clearly its soon tobe diminished
You want ta have 20 minutes after i drop my verse..it's clear..
Gunna feed pre-write..like humans dirtying the o-zone..atmosphee
Who the fuck is gunna read this and vote..it's gunna take forever
I could split these 10 lines an 2..battled you twice..took 2 W's together
But no you could'a be cocky..like a gay dude..tryn'a hustle the dick
You think me battlen some ego net thug..people gunna give shit
Nobody care what you say..hell i'm practically writtin a song
To put you in the dirt..right where your dumb yung ass belongs

a bar is 2 lines...fuckin retard

alright you've been longer then 20 minutes hurry up and drop you wack fuck

no need for me to go into what you eat, for
breakfast, lunch, dinner, all you want is cock
meat, why the fuck cant this ounk ass accept
defeat, you know you to wak to stand and take
my heat, you need to backdown, before my rhymes
knock you around, you pissed your pants, they're so
wet, you would think it was raining from the ground,
talkin bout spittin, is that what you do? i heard niggas
say you swallow for a dollar or two, nigga i got da
braggin rights, so go figga why my shit is out of sight,
you a new to rb for the real, and ima seal the deal, no
mistake, you structure looks half fuckin baked, you
must of been high as hell tryin to step to me, you look
like tinkerbell gettin fucked in a jail cell, i know thats
how you like it nigga dont try to hide, your boyfriend
told me your asshole is 8 inches wide, now you complainin,
sayin i just wanted a ride, well thats what you got,
butt fucked all night long, while sucking on cock, now
its been 10 seconds in da ring and we got a TKO, yung
done kicked you back, so its time to go hoe.

it was only like 15 min dumbass!!!!!!!!111!!!!!1
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!111

Uppin....................
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Okay battle.....

Punches:Rue
Flow:Tie
Structure:Tie
Creativity:Rue
Multies:Neither
Metas:Rue
Complexity:Neither
Enjoyment:Rue
Overall:Rue

I feel that both verses lacked....But at least Rue attempted punches...Yung, no beef or anything but ya verse had not one solid punch that I seen....Rue although some of your punches were played they were still enuff to win this battle......

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good battle but i think rue took dis one..wat happend yugn thug???i know u can do better i've been checkin out ur shyt.......
vote=rue
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