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02-12-06, 06:44 AM
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Nt Your Average
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What Was I(UNF And Implicit)
IP: C369 89DD
www.soundclick.com/unf Yeah! Left Feed Track N Snypa N Mizz Doggystyle http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2653643 Them Shortys,Them N***as Fux Trak N Snypa http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2653644 Them Shortys
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02-12-06, 09:26 AM
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IP: 64CA 6C26
There was too much dead air between the hook and the first verse...should have ad libbed it
1st cat...vocals are clear but needs more presence, IMO....dub them or amp them flow is good there needs to be talking or adlibbing between the verses...it sounds hella empty 2nd verse...sounds expressive...good flow...could stand for more vocal presence though UNF...flow is good str8 verse good collab...just needed some filler in between the verses 1 |
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02-12-06, 09:35 AM
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Nt Your Average
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IP: C369 89DD
Thanks........................
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02-12-06, 12:30 PM
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IP: 1570 45AE
Yeah.....I gotta agree with Tha Q about that dead air space in the beginning. The first verse should have started right where the beat kicked in at. First dude was alright.....his verse seemed short though cause he started late. Second dude sounds like the same dude. His quality isn't the best....sounds like he's too far away or something. Content is pretty good though....I like it. UNF, your quality came up a little. This was actually a pretty good track from you guys....
Keep it up  ™
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02-12-06, 12:52 PM
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Nt Your Average
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IP: C369 89DD
thanks...................
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