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Idle | 0 | 0% | |
*-XpLiCiT-* | 2 | 100.00% | |
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01-30-04, 02:34 PM | #1 | |
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XpLiCiT~vs~Idle
IP: BB92 6178
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no feedin no bitin no recyclin no hate/dickride/favour/crew votes/E.T.C. 10-20 lines max due tonight by midnight 5 votes to win 3-0 for KO lets go... |
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01-30-04, 02:37 PM | #2 | |
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IP: BB92 6178
this is ma check in...............................
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01-30-04, 02:42 PM | #3 | |
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IP: AB89 C0DC
this is idle checking in, i'll probally spit way before midnight.
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01-30-04, 05:32 PM | #4 | |
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IP: AB89 C0DC
I’m the shit you aint heard before this mans the retard you would pay to ignore, going against me was a major flaw.
I’m not Lennox Lewis but I’ll break your jaw, I’m high above you like I’m on Thai draw leaving this illiterate fagot in awe. Don’t mess with me because you don’t want the drama, split you in half like a banana make sure you’ll suffer, like I’m bad karma. Don’t need to hear your lyrics I know you’ve flopped, your sixteen years old and your balls aint dropped You think your xplicit, you just spasticated, I’ll give this retard so much abuse it should be illicit. I’m not politically correct, this queer deserve the abuse I’m vending. One things for certain your life won’t have a happy ending. Blood’s thicker than water, but water is thicker than mine. You know your dead when you hear the church bell chimes. Only those who dare to lose… are called pussys p.s. you aint xzibit |
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01-30-04, 07:40 PM | #5 | |
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IP: 1B3B C284
hahahahah.....no
lets go.. u think u idlin to greatness but heres a factor or *2*// u said yah *new* but already the wackness caught up to *u*// blabberin words to urself or whatever u call *rappin*// yah life n ur record's the only thing u'll be *scratchin*//(his avy) brighter and hotter then the ever lovin *heat*// I'll be satisfied when yah dead and yah heart stops to *beat*// u formally known as livin proof of a pathectic *sucka*// I'm the reason ur moms gon be poppin u a new *brotha*// gleemin screams of *fright* through yah nightmares at *night*// in the dark, where I was born *right*-ready-2-*fight*// raindrops drip in despite of yah life bein *discarded*// it rains *harder* as I speak but the storms juss *started*// ma buisness is *out* the whole worlds bout to find *out*// how u stand as a man but yah sex status is in *doubt*// I aint gotta lie or stutta u the worst rappa *alive*// no need to *hide* but its surprisin for this long u've *survived*// yah road ends career juss simply cuts *short*// bad nuff u got yah dreams but now yah life to *sort*// I didnt try, against u this shit was juss for *fun*// now its time to *run* all the way back to where u came *from*// EzZ... |
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01-30-04, 08:33 PM | #6 | |
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IP: 1B3B C284
uppin votes x1......................................
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01-30-04, 08:50 PM | #7 | |
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IP: 5CAE 0E81
xplicit won this battle that brotha line killed him
i was l.m.a.o. at that the utha guy had all right ryms but not as good punch lines and my vote xplicit Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - Token |
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01-31-04, 04:32 AM | #8 | |
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IP: AB89 C0DC
uppin
*2* and *u* very poor and it took you 2 hours more. |
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01-31-04, 04:48 AM | #9 | |
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IP: EB27 E87F
alright here's how I saw this.
Flow=xplicit, his structure was much better which made it an easier read. Punches=xplicit, he had harder punches, and he also had more punches. Personals=xplicit, he had more, and his were better. Idle, I didn't really see much personals from you. Multies=xplicit, even though neither had that many, xplicit had more. Vocab=I'm gona say Idle on this one, he at least tried to put some upper level vocab in his piece, xplicit your vocab was kind of rudimentary not to basic, just not on an upper level. My vote goes to Xplicit |
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01-31-04, 05:53 AM | #10 | |
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IP: EB27 E87F
Forgot to ask for votes on my battle, win or lose I want it voted on.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...anIllabymidnite |
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01-31-04, 04:00 PM | #11 | |
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IP: AB89 C0DC
uppin this battle
somebody else vote on this |
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01-31-04, 04:17 PM | #12 | |
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IP: 283B 08F8
I’m the shit you aint heard before this mans the retard you would pay to ignore, going against me was a major flaw.
I’m not Lennox Lewis but I’ll break your jaw, I’m high above you like I’m on Thai draw leaving this illiterate fagot in awe. your opening is alright.. You start with two alright multis for your verse but the bars seem overdrawn. The punchs are alright, nothing to specil though, same with the metaphors Don’t mess with me because you don’t want the drama, split you in half like a banana make sure you’ll suffer, like I’m bad karma. Don’t need to hear your lyrics I know you’ve flopped, your sixteen years old and your balls aint dropped the follow through is an alright punch. good personal shot. the set could came off alot better with the wording though. the karma part was a decent concept You think your xplicit, you just spasticated, I’ll give this retard so much abuse it should be illicit. I’m not politically correct, this queer deserve the abuse I’m vending. One things for certain your life won’t have a happy ending. alright punchs here.. follow through isnt bad but needed more of a connection towards the end i thought Blood’s thicker than water, but water is thicker than mine. You know your dead when you hear the church bell chimes. not digging the ending seemed filler ish Over all your verse was alright, you came with some nice multis through out the verse, along with punchs, although they werent hittingfor the hardest they were still there with decent metaphors i guess. u think u idlin to greatness but heres a factor or *2*// u said yah *new* but already the wackness caught up to *u*// opening could have used a rewording or two.. the follow through wasnt bad blabberin words to urself or whatever u call *rappin*// yah life n ur record's the only thing u'll be *scratchin*//(his avy) follow through had a nice personal on it, set punch was sort of weak through brighter and hotter then the ever lovin *heat*// I'll be satisfied when yah dead and yah heart stops to *beat*// seemed kind of fillerish here u formally known as livin proof of a pathectic *sucka*// I'm the reason ur moms gon be poppin u a new *brotha*// the metaphor on the follow through was sort of play depending on how you looked at it. the punch seemed like it needed more gleemin screams of *fright* through yah nightmares at *night*// in the dark, where I was born *right*-ready-2-*fight*// not much of a way of punchs here raindrops drip in despite of yah life bein *discarded*// it rains *harder* as I speak but the storms juss *started*// fillerish type ma buisness is *out* the whole worlds bout to find *out*// how u stand as a man but yah sex status is in *doubt*// nice punch on the follow through I aint gotta lie or stutta u the worst rappa *alive*// no need to *hide* but its surprisin for this long u've *survived*// the follow through needed a little rewording to help out the punchs strength yah road ends career juss simply cuts *short*// bad nuff u got yah dreams but now yah life to *sort*// eh could have held a better punch I didnt try, against u this shit was juss for *fun*// now its time to *run* all the way back to where u came *from*// Ending could have used a punch more Over all ya verse had an ok flow to it but wasnt that smooth at times. Your punchs started pretty good then fell off towards the ending. MEtaphors needed a little bit more through out your verse. Vote- Xplicit For the fact Idle you needed more direct punchs in your verse, X seemed to hit with more and harder ones through out his verse. Peep this and drop an honest vote yall http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111116
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02-02-04, 06:49 PM | #13 | |
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IP: 1B3B C284
so then thats 2-0 for me upin x2 plz hurry this shit up people
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02-02-04, 07:39 PM | #14 | |
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IP: B7B3 41B1
Xplicit took this wit better punches and flow and structure and jus over all better verse, what else can I say.......that brotha line made me laugh too! lol
Idle dont think cuz u got all the multies that u slapped together is gon win battles. Xplicit! VOte On this....http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111683 |
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02-02-04, 11:14 PM | #15 | |
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IP: 718C B93B
aigh I guess thats 2-0 nuttin then uppin x3 lets go people
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