Did a collab for my crew BDS on BZ with Atom and my boy Original...It's tha 2nd track right now.... http://www.soundclick.com/bands/8/thavisionmusic.htm

Tha order goes:
Intro: Tha Vision and Original
Verse 1: Tha Vision
Hook: Atom and Tha Vision
Verse 2: Atom
Verse 3: Tha Vision/Orignal/Tha Vision/Original (We cypher back and forth)

It's hard to not come tight on that beat, what beat was that????? The delivery i feel was good but not great, i really liked the lyrics and word structure and rhyme scheme. I feel with a more polished delivery that shit is top notch. Tight drop and i look forward to hearing more.

P.S. more of what i mean about the delivery is just more confidence in yer voice it seemed confident but still lacked a little fire for that beat....1 stay up!!!

nice beat, sound quality was a lil sketchy, but not that bad, maybee my cpu.

that was a tight beat, i like most things about this drop, ^^^like that other guy sed, u need a lil more fire in ya voice,
nice drop though

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