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10-18-03, 04:22 PM
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Plz feedback on new beat
IP: 5B88 012B
hey yall.... im new to producing so give me some slack.. but i need some feedback.. tell me what i should add not add do or not do.... I NEED REAL CRITICISM TO ELEVATE... *Dont hesitate to show a lil love either
ok here is the FIRST BEAT I EVER MADE... like amonth ago... dont listen to long its trash... just want to give you an idea on where im comin from... 1 shot kill http://www.soundclick.com/util/Stre...?ID=524848&q=lo http://www.soundclick.com/util/Stre...?ID=524848&q=hi now my new beat elegant http://www.soundclick.com/util/Stre...?ID=633865&q=lo http://www.soundclick.com/util/Stre...?ID=633865&q=hi this is a rough draft.. i left it open so i can take in suggestions and make changes. i got some other ones... wat up.. am i elevate.. or what... do u see talent... ive been at it for about a month. what suggestions you have?? |
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10-24-03, 05:04 AM
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IP: D116 AECE
uhh man you fuckin demented. you musta been smokin that sherm when you made 1 shot kill ahhahaha.
elegant the melody is cool but it needs to be looped better. just change a little bit of the end of the pattern and it will sound right. payce |
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10-24-03, 05:05 AM
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IP: D116 AECE
oh and i think instinct is your best beat so far. im a sucker for bangers.
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10-24-03, 03:37 PM
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IP: 9E18 D314
i thought the melody was aight but maybe only use the high bell cymbals every 4 bar or sumthin. I wasn't as keen on the drums, maybe a deeper kick and sum constant, but really faint/soft shakers going in the background would help fill up the space a little.
keep at it.
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