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Due: 40 Mins
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Gone up to 40 now huh?..........no worries........chek chek chek in.........................11111000000 characters..........................

lol.......william does it mean that much to ya for me to spit 1st
ok......there we go

Grab Will By His Braces, I Scream “I told Ya That I’d Getcha”,
Strangled With His Own Laces, Won’t See Another Semester.
...Figure Me Out… He Knows Himself His Lines R Puzzled,
Line By Line…Ya Broke Down, Burnt, Strapped & Muzzled.
To Hold Heat, I Saw This Kid Swallowing Radioactive Napalm,
Has To Hurt Himself…For His Punches To Even Cause Harm.
Opened A Can Of WoopAss? You Can’t Even Find The Opener,
Your Beginning Means The End, I’ve Begun To Write The Finisher.
Puttin Holes In This Chump, Like Aerosols To The O-Zone Layer,
Will Beating Me, Shit That’s Wak, Like Arnie Becoming Mayor.

*Will Getcha….Its His Name …Duh
*…Figure Me Out…Check His Sig
*Governor/Mayor….American Term/English Term

Advice: Learn To Rhyme Ya Lines

HIV? Hold'n It Down...Shit, Not Wut It Seems, Kids
Drown Ya Ass In Tha Pacific Ocean, Sho U Wut A Wet Dream Is
Why Waste 5 Mins Wipe'n Yo Ass Wen I Could Wipe Mine
Juss Call Me An Operator, Tha Way I Gotcha Life On Tha Line
Brix Gettin Rammed Now..Get Ya Scripts Tighter Fuckin Bitch-biter
Ya verse Is dismissed And Gets Thumbz Down Like Dislexic Hitch-hikers
WiL Begins To Speak, Brix Gets Wrecked, I Forever End The Weak
He's Like An Unsuccessful Porn Track Team...Lacks A Winning Streak
Told Him To Get His Flows Tite So He Wrapped His Period In Plastic
You'd Have To Come To School Wit A Flu To Be Considered Clas-sick!*

*HIV Is His Crew Nd AIDS Is A Class __ Disease

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Good verses by both parties....

"Grab Will By His Braces, I Scream “I told Ya That I’d Getcha”,"
Nice line

"Juss Call Me An Operator, Tha Way I Gotcha Life On Tha Line"
Nice

Very close, but in the end Brixton's punches seem a little harder...nothn but respect for both of ya....

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W/e Dawg..
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can't take the truth?.....you got beat son....you got your first loss.....take a seat bitch~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

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Strong Words Come'n From A Newb..
I'll Use Ur Face To Clean Tha Seat
Then I'll Glady Sit On It..Word Tho
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stop bein a prik and jus take the votes................................god stop tryin to force the issue

uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin 1st...................................

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damn close battle here.....u both were pretty equal on punches and personals....Wil had it in wordplay and metas.....Brix had a better flow and also edged it a bit on vocabulary.....nice battle between u two...u both seemed to be a pretty equal battle...but here's a breakdown for u two....

Multis - Neither
Metas - Wil
Punches - Tie
Flow - Brix
Wordplay - Wil
Vocab - Brix
Personals - Tie
Creativity - Brix
Violence - Tie
Complexity - Wil
RhymeScheme - Brix

Wil - 3 out of 11
Brix - 4 out of 11
Tie - 3 out of 11
1 Neither

Overall - Brixton got this by a catepillar's nutsack...

peace
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i cant vote cuz i dont have 250 post

this was a close ass battle but brixton takes this by a slim margin. brixtons punches were just lil to much to handle

creativity=brixton
structure=tie
punches=brixton
flow=wil
effort=tie

very competitive battle

if i could vote my vote would go to brixton

nice battle

uppin for these cats

multies..............nun
punches............both
flow....................Brix
personals.............nun
vocab................Will
metaphors...........Will
Similes................Brix
creativity..............Brix

Very close ide say, enjoyed both verses

Brix your online, sorry i cant vote but hit this up honestly man

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=86394