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Old 03-03-05, 12:31 PM   #1
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.K.onfliktz Vs Sdizzle

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Rules are the same as last week except for the voting

Time Limit - 1:30.....including intro and outro
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Old 03-03-05, 03:09 PM   #2
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checking...........
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Old 03-03-05, 04:19 PM   #3
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aiight fam im checkin in this....
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Old 03-04-05, 03:00 PM   #4
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is it conflicts of cornflakes, either way im the winner
eat the bitch for breakfast and shit on him for dinner
i was born a sinner, came in the world that way
dude spits gay, why u think he 'flows thatway'
hey ill leave it alone, its none of my busniness
sort of like ur rap career getting no business
dudes straight homo let me finish
got the record for taking the mosts dicks in guiness
u a wannabe gangsta, not even the flyest
the type that says fuck the police, then apologizes
someone get some scissors, and unroll a hose
cuz ull see this flaming faggot hanging from the end of a rope
rather a noose and i hope u choke to death
this dude aint shit when he cant type his text
beating me? sure, ur the best
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that was everyone holding their breathe
whats next, the fact that u'll lose
i mean id say ur the the best, but that'd conflict with the truth


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Old 03-05-05, 10:58 AM   #5
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The End Of The Snoop Wannabee

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Lyrics:

Dizzle Says He Makes Beats...He Just A Dumb Bitch..
How You Gon Lose To A Dude with a pair of drum sticks
...I Dump Clips...Have Him Beggin, On Sum Bum Shit..
This Fagz gettin ate like a fat bitch and sun chips..
And Konfliktz aint Gotta Make big Track..
Cuz I Bet He'll Quit This round For a Soda and a big Mac..
Your Timin Is Week...I'm Divin This Geek...
U aint Clappin Dudes..This Fat Fuck Hidez in the Seats..
Bring Ya fat Over here, and watch How I Blow Guts..
Cuz Da Only Way u eatin me is if i was a Doughnut..
You Cant Rap For Shit, So Stop Actin Kid..
This homos all fake like hollywood actresses..
Chop him up leave this Nigga on the murder scene..
And U Kno u a herb wen u from da dirty bean..
this kids a bitch Mayn, Far From a Boy..
You Know For a Fact Wen he Uses Tampax for a sex toy..

Outro:

these lames are foggin up the game..
its a shame...How they....

shit was sorta rushed..just tryin to get it out the way...
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Old 03-05-05, 11:29 AM   #6
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sdizzle
whoa....nice beat in the background...the flow was pretty good
had decent punches (without readin your verse)...decent quality
there, but overall you had a nice shit though

.K.onfliktz
Lol...you had a nice beat to yours also, the flow was on point here
and the quality shit, was decent too...liked your punches (without
readin your verse either)...they were hard & pretty much landed hea,
but overall you had a good piece too

Overall
Both of you had nice drops, the flows & punches were practically on
point & the beats were dope...but since only 1 person can get my vote
here, then imma have to go wit .K.onfliktz...kinda felt that he had hardr
punches thru out the whole shit, even though both of you had good
personas up in there aslo...but no hate to both, but my vote goes to...

Konflitkz



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Old 03-06-05, 01:18 PM   #7
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Sdizzle
Intro was a little ineffective....not really feeling it because it wasn't even the slightest bit true. We've all seen pictures of .K.onfliktz, so we know he's black....and he doesn't really sound white, let alone overly white. On to the verse.....your content was kinda boring. You didn't have any personals, let alone any good punches. It's funny how you can come up with some witty lines in text, but then spit garbage on the mic. You need some help with your lyrics for real. Your best line would have to be "the type that says fuck the police, then apologizes," which actually wasn't bad, but the rest of your lines really needed some help. Now, production wise, you could have made your vocals a little louder. If it wasn't for you posting your lyrics, I would have had no clue as to what you were saying. Your voice sounded a little muffled too in some spots. Delivery wise I thought it was better than I heard from you before. I actually felt like you were trying to diss him. Your flow could have used a little work, but for the most part it was pretty good. I just honestly thought you didn' have the lyrics to pull this one off.

.K.onfliktz
Intro wasn't bad.....just a little talk to get hyped up. The first thing I noticed was your presence. I thought you had the raw emotion that ate him up from the first line. Your lyrical content was a lot better than dizzle's. You actually had some personals in there, but you could use a little diversity. All I heard were a bunch of fat jokeswhich, with dizzle, get old quick. Next time try to poke fun at other areas that no one has hit yet. Your production wasn't bad. Your vocals were pretty clear and I could hear every word you spit. Flow was off in a spot or two, but not bad for the most part. Overall I think you just out shined dizzle on this track

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Old 03-06-05, 09:31 PM   #8
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Soundclicks down right now... ima edit this with my vote
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Old 03-08-05, 01:26 PM   #9
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Sdizzle: your verse was a little below average, your intro just took time
away from you jammin some more punches in your verse and making it
more effective, i didnt hear any emotion you might of had some but
like E said your vocals we're too low, should of made them louder
your "personals" and punches were either at random or just didnt connect
to Kon at all, should of played off his name or some shit in his profile
something.........your prescence on the mic was blah, should of got hyped
overall uh meh....your lyrics were kinda wack

Kon: your verse was better for this reason, you got hyped, i could hear you
your lyrics were slightly better, find some shit that connects that makes
us go DAMN!!! you were just throwing out shit thats been said, but
atleast your personals were directed towards Dizzle punches were better
you had a prescence on the mic and like i said got hype while going
deeper into your verse....overall you had better lyrical content and more
of a prescence....


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