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04-16-08, 10:42 AM | #1 | |||
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"Half Man Pat"
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heres a piece that im pretty proud of. its a really old topical from a battle i had with acuity. the topic was: living with no legs. "HALF MAN PAT" BROKEN... they ran to the bus stop, books in hand, hopin' its behind today they noticed their line and knew they were fine, they liked the slight delays both dropped on the bench, talked to the kids and snacked on yogurt to feed they looked over sheets of homework to think, then they heard the SCREECH!!! it was too late to react......the man in the Jag crashed where they sat he smashed in the pack and happened to wrap the back on a lavendoer 'Lac the accident ceased in a flash...pedestrians ran to the scene of the crash one child survived the impact, but was buried beneath debris in the grass weeks had passed b4 weakened Pat came beamin' back from unconsciousness Dr. Smith, Father Rick and Ma talked of the consequence...he caught the jist brother Chris, the twins and Jenn all died that day...he felt faint now then they stated, that to save him...they amputated from the waist down he understood the severity...the 10 year olds scream echoed uncomparibly Pat was forced to stay 'till Spring...to finish off his multiple therapies sorrow mounted upon his release 'cuz good ol' Denise (the medic) was cool anxiety grew, he felt like a freak and was postponing his headin' to school he put if off as long as he could......then he finally made his entrance nuthin's the same, it was entirely different...most his classmates kept their distance trust it took 3 years to get adjusted, but it was worth the work now its on to high school as a freshman, where he heard the jerks were worse if happiness was a masterpiece...then this new challenge was his canvas he'd paint from the heart and planned this, the second he rolled on2 campus he was met with immature comments and whispers from all sorts of scum 2day was the 1st day of the next 4 years...and there was much more 2 come were they aware? or did they care that their shared stares were unfair? poor Pat wasnt prepared...for those terrible glares left unbearable tares the chumps were 2 busy duckin' him to have ever had fun with him and punks were 2 busy punchin' him to have ever had lunch with him he hesitated to math, because he was degraded and berated in class some ignorant ass said "he deficates in a bag" so he's been paraded with laffs he was a nice cat......the type of guy to never try and fight back the 1 time that he tried that he got blackeyes and was tied 2 the bike rack he loses pieces of self, everytime unfair treatment was dealt he didnt believe in himself...and hated always needin' the help Pat wished to be home, in the safe place, surrounded by his bedroom walls instead of this insane place, where he wept alone in the restroom stalls things got scary, so Pat grew weary because he wasnt very strong things carried on for so very long, he knew the bullies had barely won Pat was hopeless and completely broken by the time he was a Junior his grades had slipped alot, so suicidal thoughts became his only crooner he got wasted, prayed quick, then popped everything he could and swallowed Ma found his body laying in vomit...next to his empty pill bottles Our Lord works in mysterious ways....Pat never got his burial rites he survived the attempted suicide and gained a new outlook on life he graduated with honors...then went away to college in the bay Pat hit his books harder...got smarter...gained knowledge and remained eventually he wrote 2 books 'bout the handicapped experience in our society the day his third was released.....it marked 10 years of his sobriety now he mentors troubled youths...and has established clinics and camps the "half man" outgrew his curse....all he had to do was give it a chance ...FIXED ...the supervillain of crhyme...
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QUESTION: Is it even possible to improve upon perfection??? ANSWER: CRHYME SINDICATE "I remember this one time I thought I was wrong........but I was mistaken." -Unknown R.I.P. Jonathan "ONE MAN BAND/TERUMOTO" Nigro. Goodbye brother. God bless the dead. One love. |
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