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Old 04-20-07, 01:28 PM   #1
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I'm Fly High (Jim Jones Diss) will rtf
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i kinda rushed the recording of the hook but meh, its alright. let me know what yall think

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=241285
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Old 04-20-07, 01:37 PM   #3
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^it's for fun duke, any dumbass would notice that.
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Old 04-20-07, 01:49 PM   #4
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your hook was HORRIBLE...

BALLIN!!!!

lyrics were dope, but yeah...your hook was shit....good try tho
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Old 04-20-07, 02:13 PM   #5
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pros________

beats siight.....

quality is not bad...

mixed nice.....

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ur lyrics r pretty basic....basicaly wack....

u got no rythum man....ur on some beasty boys w less swagger shit

hook is ass bro...

"bitch go cry..oh my"

lol.....

"im so hot u be burnin in my heat..."

LOL.....

man....ur garbo dude...im sorry

u need to step ur lyrical game up immediately

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Old 04-20-07, 05:16 PM   #6
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before first verse ended i was already bored of the repitive flow...regarding the punches, nothing really stood out..alot of it sounded played out. Lyrics lackin creativity, nothing too memorable.
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Old 04-20-07, 05:21 PM   #7
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well


ur delivery and aggression onthe track are nice

other than that, it wasn't all that...

If you're gonna diss an industry cat with their own beat, you gotta be at least better than they are.




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Old 04-20-07, 06:07 PM   #8
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i listened to a bit of this earlier today......the quality is pretty good....don't need any real help there...lyrics could be upped a little bit for a diss...especially to someone laced up in the game like jimmy.....ummmm the thing that really stood out that needs to be fixed is the "BALLIN" part.....sounds to....iono....not right.....

other then that..its all good in the hood
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Old 04-20-07, 06:32 PM   #9
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haha thanks for the feed. i know my lines basic, I'm tryina work on it.
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Old 04-24-07, 02:25 PM   #10
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BALLA!!!!!!lol this was ight ur flow needs to be smoother u gotta aabbaa rhymescheme .....i was watin to hear a jim jones flow.....but u came witta SIMPLER FLOW.....hook is kinda garbo u shoulda did sumthing different overall this was ight u stay up rtf its real shit
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ur delivery and aggression onthe track are nice

other than that, it wasn't all that...

If you're gonna diss an industry cat with their own beat, you gotta be at least better than they are.



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lmao exactly. the fuck you think son? hahaha
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wow.....................................dont diss anyoneever again please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Old 04-25-07, 04:10 PM   #13
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step it up..

you have no kinda swag at all..your whole flow is too robotic and it sounds like youre worrying too much about ending each line on that last snare..

..lyrically it was below average..
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Check your downloads on soundclcik i DL hella of your songs to listen to just to see what you got hit me up on myspace.com/westcoast916 so far i'm likin what i hear so if you wana collab hit me up
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Old 05-10-07, 06:20 PM   #15
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you upped ya levels madd since i heard you, dont sound robotic nymore, quality is shit though...dnno why ppl sayin its good...lines are basic like they said, but flows on point, need a lil more polishin still a lil choppy but u gettin there breh...deliverys good imo...sounds kinda agressive, keep up.

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