Me and my boy did this song up at the college in one of the practice rooms for piano class. No real concept. We just got on the mic and did it.

Beat: Spontane
Verses: 1 - Me
2 - Mike
3 - Me
4 - Mike

www.soundclick.com/implicitus



Here are the links I left feed on

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=241650
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=241681

da flow is strate on both mcs...

1st Verse - nice message........flow is strate.......delivery is fine.......i like what ya sayin even though i'm not religious.....

2nd Verse- same message as above stickin to the topic.........flow is strate.......delivery is nice too.......strate verse

3rd Verse- same as above

4th verse - "These dudes look at their brother like Cain did Abel" i like how u used some scripture....nice verse

Overall - quality wuz nice.......stuck to topic......even thoe yall didn't have a title...nice track...keep droppen.......

pz

~1~

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thanks for the feed..i'll leave some feed if u got somethin.

ayo i left some feed on your track.

I like the concept of the track....your real religious huh? thats whats up......but yea flow delivery lyrics to me was coo i think implicit had the better flow tho.....u guys have that underground flow and shit......gud shit yall keep at it =1=

beat is real funky...sounds familiar too

Love the pro-jesus lyrics!



feelin both flows


enjoyable track



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thanks to everyone for the feed. i'll return it. this is the very first song we did together...wrote and recorded in about an hour and a half.

uppity up this track right heeeeere

a track like this needs a hook....its a message track the message hits harder is better remembered with a hook....i feel like your quality used to be alot worse....both dudes are cool n the voices match well....you sound a lil more polished, he has some spots where he sounds hesitant....nice oldschool feel not a bad track...but i feel its missing something...that something being a hook....nice lyrics n flow n all tho....your on the right path

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thanks for the feed

its funny that you mentioned the quality cause all i really did was turn the volume down..no effects or nothing

but thanks for the feed..if yall drop links i can return feed

uppity up up this and away

lets get some more feed on this thang...

surprisingly good quality. thought i'd be bad if u was just foolin around. dont wanna hear the lyrics. decent quality flows a bit choppy wit second dude. couple good lines. lame chorus.

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^^^you obviously didnt listen to the song if you said "lame chorus"..because there was actually NO CHORUS at all. thanks.