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Old 05-07-07, 01:40 AM   #1
Jay Rose
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Good Morning

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word up did it a while ago...tryin to get some feed on it....
lil love song for the lady...

riggs on the beat...apexx with the mixing....

Good Morning - http://www.soundclick.com/bands/son...&songID=5228054


i left feed on
inspector by ebrics
so big by paradyce
and that one kidyork song....i dont feel like copying and pasting links...get at me if its REALLY that important tho....
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Old 05-07-07, 01:46 AM   #2
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beat comes in pretty cool..really feelin the beat

verse comes in nice..quality is really good. apexx does a good job with this...lyrically i think its kinda weird how you end lines short and leave this empty space there..kinda leaves the listener hangin like "whats next?"

hook is real empty..wish you woulda put something in there like some adlibs

verse 2 comes in now liking this verse..flow and delivery are real cool...

verse 3 the dubs give it more attitude so thats cool..lyrically this is a lot better than the first 2 verses.


this track overall was real good..hit me up man..we gots to collabo..
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Old 05-07-07, 01:57 AM   #3
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ill get at you online soon
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well i thought about the army
dad said, son you're fucking high
and i thought, yeah there's a first for everything
so i took my old man's advice
three sad semesters
it was only fifteen grand spent in bed
i thought about the army
i dropped out and joined a band instead


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Old 05-10-07, 01:11 AM   #5
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can i get some love?
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well i thought about the army
dad said, son you're fucking high
and i thought, yeah there's a first for everything
so i took my old man's advice
three sad semesters
it was only fifteen grand spent in bed
i thought about the army
i dropped out and joined a band instead


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Old 05-10-07, 03:14 AM   #6
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beats soundin gd, feelin your flow on this one, got a mix up, i like the hook cause its not too busy an it aint takin over the sample, 2nd verse soundin betta i think, sounds sik...apexx on da mixin you can tell, lol mixin is sik...i like the fluxuations in your voice breh sounds sik wid your delivery, an your voice is sik.....3rd verse sounds good, i like the adlibs on this trak mostly, makes the trak i think....lyrics soundin good too, emotional & deep...iunno sounds pretty much polished, sik trak....

what you been up 2 lately nyways, aint tlked in time lol
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Old 05-10-07, 04:47 PM   #7
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Beat is pretty chillin, you come in with real nice energy..Quality is hot..Lyrics are on some real shit, I like it. First verse is hot man..Hook is pretty chill, sample is dope. Second verse is nice as well..Everything is consistent which is good..Third verse seems like it's lacking a bit compared to the other 2, but still dope..Solid shit.
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Old 05-10-07, 08:42 PM   #8
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Beat is kinda bleh...

Quality is decent, not wonderful.

Flow is fast. Lyrics are decent.

It was alright, not my kind of track.

Keep it up.
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Old 05-12-07, 02:20 AM   #9
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this was ight...i jus culdnt vibe wit the voice seems like its been heard befor...lyrical content is coo delivery is coo....beat is ight....im not sure if im feelin the hook its kinda dull.....otherthan that coo track
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Old 05-12-07, 07:53 PM   #10
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feelin the intensity on the beat...and the beat is hard hittin

mixin is nice...no doubt


slick track bro



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