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05-09-07, 01:49 AM
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On The Air - COMIN JAN 07
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Breathe Eazy King Kong Remix
IP: BB78 D6B4
WORD!!!HOTTNESS!!!
 Click Here For Song 1rst - E.Millz 2nd - Past Tense 3rd - Swagga Boi 4th - Akeem "The Conscious" ====== Links ---------- http://community.rapverse.com/showp...844&postcount=5 ------- http://community.rapverse.com/showp...845&postcount=4 |
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05-09-07, 01:58 AM
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IP: 5E98 B05F
beat is cool..that voice is annoying.
1st dude - vocals are a little low..dont like his voice. kinda sounds annoying and monotonous. flow is cool though and it works for this beat. didnt really fall off. delivery was cool. empty space is weird. and its too long with nothing there. at least introduce yourself 2nd verse - got a little more swag than first dude..quality sounds like you kinda fell off a little. i dont get it though. first youre a christian rapper and then youre not and then you are again? not too sure whats up with you.. empty space again..kinda sucks cause it makes me wanna turn it off 3rd verse - swagga boi? thats a pretty funny name..dont like this dude as much as the first 2. lyrically nothing special. rhyme scheme is real basic. 4th verse - like this dudes delivery and everything most..lyrically its nothing that really stood out. but he jus sounds better with this beat than everyone else. a few lines sound a little rushed though maybe the outro have some talkin or something..the hook sounds real empty. wish yall woulda came with more energy on the whole track. |
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05-09-07, 10:26 AM
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I don't lose
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IP: 3011 7E9C
no way you can top the opening line from the real song....lets see.....?
nope..... first guy had a pretty good flow not enough emotion somepoints...and a lame closing line but pretty good presence tho....not too bad lets see how you come in... eh, you had good swager on this shit...but your verse was a lil off topic a bit...but you did good with it...needs some adlibs to keep it intresting kinda lulls you a lil bit...lets see ya other dudes... ouch...cockpit line....really? i think i heard that one in mainstream already...means your a lil late on that one....BUt same thing as past tense...not bad just nothing to keep me intrested in it all verse long.... 3rd guy tried to get a complicated rhyme scheme with this...not that type of song....not too bad, i liked the first guy the best imo....but nothing as good as "ay yo this beat is bananas" this one i have to chop up to the mainstream....get more hype like they did... rtf on good morning
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05-09-07, 02:14 PM
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10:23 till i'm 86
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IP: E979 6945
3rd dude, i think got the cockiest flow... 4th lil grimmier, like that, seemed short though, needed to switch up the flow.
past- decent first bar. like the more switchin up flow, catchiest i think, ended a lil quiet though.
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05-09-07, 05:41 PM
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New to RV
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IP: A33F EE91
Thanks for the feedbacc yall, keep it comin!
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05-09-07, 05:41 PM
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On The Air - COMIN JAN 07
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IP: BB78 D6B4
thanks for the feed uppin
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05-09-07, 06:59 PM
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Nt Your Average
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IP: C820 C763
1st bruv...i like his style, the singin kinda flow...flows soundin kl, needs EQin betta still, sounds a bit too hollow too...but its live...kl verse
2nd breh...PAST! i aint heard u in time breh u kl??? soundin sik, qualitys a bit hollow i rememba u havin betta quality, flows nice, feelin it! like the bang bang ba bang....the way u split it 3rd...his voice is ill, hollow quality again, need to take some MIDS out imo...kl verse in end, flows nice still...deliverys kl...keep up 4....like his verse, his swagger sounds sik...flows gd, deliverys nicce as hell...lyrics r kl, overall a gd verse Trak soundin good n ting, keep up
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05-10-07, 09:19 AM
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New to RV
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IP: A33F EE91
Good lookin yall, lovin all the feedbacc.......
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05-10-07, 02:57 PM
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Addicted
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IP: 6ABD 581C
i dont like the beat wtf at king kong lol ight first dude is up his flow is coo...i like his delivery...lyrics is coo i jus wish you upped ur emotion a lil other than that it was cool....
WTF @ king Kong not feelin the hook..... next dude his flow is aight he more swagger than the first dude...lyrics is coo....i like ur flow shits coo...you sound way layed back...... Hook=you already know what i think lol next dude...his flow reminds me of young rooky....ur flow is coo i like that shit lyrics was ight...gud shit.... next dude....ur voice is coo but sounds like a lot of rappers.....flow is ight....lyrics is cool nice drop.....overall this was coo keep doin ur thang =1= |
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