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Old 09-02-05, 03:53 AM   #1
Mi$$ Fresh
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yo i'm Mi$$ Fresh, betta then u utha bitches
come round in my hood and i'll make u need some stiches
i'm a gangsta bitch, neva givin a fuck
i don't give a fuck about u, motha fucka say what?
i'll straight kill u bitch, u'll b 4eva asleep
down in tha ground goin 6 feet deep
u'll just b layin there wit my holes in ya flesh
cuz ain't nobody fuckin round wit Mi$$ Fresh

blah, just fuckin around, lols

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2412330

~M$$F~

Last edited by Mi$$ Fresh : 09-02-05 at 04:00 AM.
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Old 09-02-05, 05:42 AM   #2
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hmm,this is simple. Not very lyrical and pretty played topic.

You need to find a solid topic that you can relate to and try come with an original concept.

This is a keystyle so you shoudl of posted it in freestyle sub forum.

Try using word you wouldnt usualy use in everyday vocab, Think outside the square and write abotu somthing completly original to you.
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Old 09-11-05, 02:02 AM   #3
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yesh.. very unimpressive..
1/10 <0~
sorry to crush your dreams.. lol


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