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Caught him thuggin, muggin on tha corner
Never saw him before, he was a foreigner
Hat low, pants low, but he was straight high
Already makin plans to kill him....he must die
He gave me a bad vibe, sumthin bout him I ain't like
He slowly faced me and and mugged like I ain't gone fight
Without movin my lips I told him to state his purpose
Of being on my block before I erase him like his life was worthless
The blunt in my hand started sendin smoke to my eyes
And this nigga had a blunt too, to my surprise
He asked me "what kinda shit you smokin?"
Wit a mean sneer to invoke fear I just told him that its potent
I took a hit of mine,he took a hit of his
Realize we looked so alike, you'd think we were twins separated as kids
He laughed and said "I only smoke blunts wit high taste and a lil lace
To tha point where I'm so high I can't feel my face"
He even told me my shit was dipped too
Said his dope boi was the same crip too
I touched my .45, muttered "Nigga you wildin"
He touched his heat too and just started smilin
It was like he was readin my thoughts....I took another puff
He inhaled too, even with my signature huff
Had to let him know"Aiyo, yoiu gotta dip"
He barely moved, just said "you gotta lotta lip"
That was the last straw, I aimed tha heat, ready to kill
He grabbed his at the same time and said"Both our blood gonna spill"
I emptied the clip...he shot too
Layin in my blood I heard him laugh and say "Nigga I AM YOU!"
I died with him right there...and when my family saw the casket

A neighbor told them that he saw me arguin and shootin my self



...All because I was faded off a blunt that was dipped in acid

so tragic