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Old 11-05-06, 10:54 AM   #1
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7. Joe Native (1-1) vs 8. Chrit (2-0)

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Old 11-09-06, 11:52 PM   #2
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I would use tha 'crit' lines bout leavin you in crit-ical conditions
but it looks like your gonna no show...one of your wiser decisions
cause if you show in these last few minutes
then I'll break your racket like I had beef wit Tennis
Cuz if wackness is contagous then you could break this league
I'm a headache,
but forget takin Tylenol...crit, you need to take Aleve
Got this pussy on tha run so you know that I chase tha cat
I sent this guy a printout of his wackness so that he could Face tha Fax

quick 8

edit-guess its a no show blah..

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Old 11-09-06, 11:56 PM   #3
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Chrits a god at text... I'm the best of the times..
While Joe, Native... is only heard when you fucks are beggin for lines
You cant handle mines, I'll leave you rattled with welts...
Cause only time Native was dope... was when I battled myself
Dont beg me for help, I'll leave this faggot neckless
When I grind Joe... like I was thirsty for breakfast...
I'll eat this faggot chump, no way this chump could shine
I mean you bit my name... atleast you coulda jacked some good lines
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Old 11-10-06, 10:03 AM   #4
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vote fuckers!!!
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Old 11-10-06, 01:36 PM   #5
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Cuz if wackness is contagous then you could break this league
I'm a headache,
but forget takin Tylenol...crit, you need to take Aleve

vs.

You cant handle mines, I'll leave you rattled with welts...
Cause only time Native was dope... was when I battled myself
I'll eat this faggot chump, no way this chump could shine
I mean you bit my name... atleast you coulda jacked some good lines

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Old 11-10-06, 02:06 PM   #6
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You cant handle mines, I'll leave you rattled with welts...
Cause only time Native was dope... was when I battled myself
Dont beg me for help, I'll leave this faggot neckless
When I grind Joe... like I was thirsty for breakfast...

vs.

Nothing

Joe, Aleve line wasn't bad but I've seen it a few times before. Face the fax was kinda corny. Other two lines were just kinda bland statements. Chrit, wasn't feelin' the opener or closer but the other two lines were good enough to quote so...

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Old 11-10-06, 03:06 PM   #7
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Cuz if wackness is contagous then you could break this league
I'm a headache,
but forget takin Tylenol...crit, you need to take Aleve

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You cant handle mines, I'll leave you rattled with welts...
Cause only time Native was dope... was when I battled myself
I'll eat this faggot chump, no way this chump could shine
I mean you bit my name... atleast you coulda jacked some good lines

Joe you messed up droppin a no-show verse... you should know chrit puls all sorts of corky shit like that... i quoted the alive line cause it made me chuckle n i aint really seen them.. but then again i cant remember the punches i used last week so yeah.

Chrit your shit was eh your opener wasnt good self glory is stupid... middle two punches was good... closer wasnt really feelin..

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Old 11-10-06, 04:26 PM   #8
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Cuz if wackness is contagous then you could break this league
I'm a headache,
but forget takin Tylenol...crit, you need to take Aleve
^I LIKED THAT. I SEEN THAT WORDPLAY B4 BUT I STILL FELT IT

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I'll eat this faggot chump, no way this chump could shine
I mean you bit my name... atleast you coulda jacked some good lines
^ DECENT PERSONAL I GUESS. I KNEW NOTHING ABOUT THE NAME
STEALING OR ALIAS THING.


V/Chrit

Both had barley a quotable, I almost put nothing VS nothing but in my personal opinion,
Personals have the edge over good wordplay unless it's the wordplay or punch is something I haven't seen before that was just That much more fire than the personal. Had Joe made a better set up for his closer that mighta been quote worthy Enuff to give him the Quote egde and the win but It woulda still been a Bland ass battle.
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Old 11-10-06, 06:18 PM   #9
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yeah, *sigh* I didn't think he was showin.

So you go by Native to huh? Thas cool, its jus I neva really seen n e otha N8'ves
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Old 11-11-06, 05:31 AM   #10
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Up over no-shows.
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Old 11-11-06, 11:27 PM   #12
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Cuz if wackness is contagous then you could break this league
I'm a headache,
but forget takin Tylenol...crit, you need to take Aleve

vs.

You cant handle mines, I'll leave you rattled with welts...
Cause only time Native was dope... was when I battled myself
Dont beg me for help, I'll leave this faggot neckless
When I grind Joe... like I was thirsty for breakfast...

^ wasn't really that close tho. apart from the one i quoted native came weak.. tough luck on the no show shit, i know you'll come better next week. i wasn't feeling chrits opener or closer.. but he did enough to take this one


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Old 11-11-06, 11:44 PM   #13
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Joe Native-I would use tha 'crit' lines bout leavin you in crit-ical conditions
but it looks like your gonna no show...one of your wiser decisions

Chrit-Dont beg me for help, I'll leave this faggot neckless
When I grind Joe... like I was thirsty for breakfast...

Thisbattle was weakkk probly cuz Native didnt know dude was gonna show but he did ,so by both quotables my vote goes to Chrit for better nameplay

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Old 11-12-06, 08:28 AM   #14
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Chrit wins 6-0.

Chrit wins (3-0)
Joe Native loses (1-2)
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