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you go first against the WU general

Ight... ill spit first... so u can bite.. haha

You don't got to worry, I don't pose a threat//
Cause I can't end your career....it ain't even started yet//
You wanna reply? Lemme get my dick out your mouth first//
Only time you spit fire's when you swallow grenades and out burst//
Probably laugh my way to the semitary if you tried to kill me/ /
Frontin' like you don't feel me, but sun jian versus Da Illy//
that's like takin' a knife to a gunfight...litterally//
Come at me with half a brain instead of half a plan//
It's like I've cut you into two...you're not even half a man//
Leave the beef forked, this kid's a butterknife//
Drown you in the sewer to show you the gutter life//
Verbally i Spit Lyrics That Cut Like Swords Of Speech//
Spit Tha Breath That Removes Stains Like My Vocal Chords Was Bleech//
Jian Could Never Beat Me, MY Best Advice Is, This Man Retire//
Cuz Im Hot Like A "Denzel" Movie, I'll Leave This "MAn On Fire"//

check it
you was born to spitt what tobacco into a bucket.
we can tell you rep the south yu carry around a musket.
my rhymes like food leave you heavy and bloated.
they waitin in line to vote and my verse havent even loaded.
yo rhymes were whack i was like what the fuck.
yo too fat get the gun so ican give you a free tummy tuck.
yo you aint blazin ima put this text on fire.
and leave yuu like the great depression whack rhymes for hire.
i can defeat you easily just give the word.
cause i can win this with three lines just like larry bird.

not my best but ok

if thats not ur best then wut is.. man i gotta give it to u.. that shit is pure.......... WACK!!!!

now lets get these votes in people

good battle 2 both
the winner is born 2 spit b/c his verse was much more complex
the punches were clever and set up well, the flow was constant throughout and he used multies, and personals to seal the deal.
the only criticizm from me is maybe use more advanced vocab+
and san juan just keep it up, elevate and u are on yur way

peace

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"afterword disperses divert blirts to quench ya thirst"

bomb first( I will BATTLE N E 1)

Help me close these/ and I will help U
an EYE 4 an EYE
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=122271

born2spit

punches: 2spit
flow2spit
rhymes sunjian
structere tie
wackness sunjian(lol naw just playin lol)
my favorite line in battle:Jian Could Never Beat Me, MY Best Advice Is, This Man Retire//
Cuz Im Hot Like A "Denzel" Movie, I'll Leave This "MAn On Fire"//\nice battle but easily tooken by born2spit

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ok the break down: Sun jian was ok but!!!!!!!!! the opeaning sucked then the last 5 lines were ok and it was a shitty flow.

Born2spiit all i got to say is keep killin' um.

best line: Jian Could Never Beat Me, MY Best Advice Is, This Man Retire//
Cuz Im Hot Like A "Denzel" Movie, I'll Leave This "MAn On Fire"//

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Ight thx for the votes guys... we just need a few more and im straihgt

Both of there flows were aight
Sanjian your shit was just to elemntary horrible vocab nice flow

Born you had a nice flow and vocab nice structure

vote born