Word I never posted my last few tracks on RV. Or on any site for feed. So hopefully it's cool if I can post some. I recorded this last March or April I think. Hit up Sean Divine for the custom beat. So similar to the original one I posted back in '06. Anyways, it's still rough since I plan on hitting up studio to record and Triple_N lacing up a second verse.

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pag...&songID=7187882

Help a brother out and give it a nice rating.

LINKS:
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...?t=249214<br />http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=249209

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i dunno if your gonna take offense to this but you sound like a cartoony nick cannon...take it for what it is....


it all sounds fine but when you re record, relax a lil it will make you seem more cocky/confident and help out the whole sound of a party track...yep

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Thanks for the feed on mine.

Beat is on some Scott Storch stuff. Or maybe an Eminem track. It'll be hard for me to leave feedback on this cause this isn't my "cup of tea".

Verse 1 - I like how you come into this verse. Real catchy. Maybe turn your main vocal up just a tad bit. Lyrically I didn't hear anything that stood out. Your sound quality is crisp too.

Chorus sounds like an Eminem song.

That part after the hook was cool. Totally threw me off but it was still cool. I liked it.


Not my kind of song but wasn't bad at all. Good shtuff.

It's cool man. I heard lot of people always tell me way I annunciate shit kinda is off. And I never got it. Then i started listening to my shit after almost a year away from it, and I totally could pick up on it. So word def gonna work on that man. Like I get what you saying.


and word, appreciate the feed implicit. Thanks

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beat is nice......is that a sample of one of your moms homeland records?lmfao hahahahahahah.
i like your flow but your voice is funny.this is actually enjoyable.its fun and thats what people been missing lately.i like this spul.hook is catchy.i would actually play this in my truck.you should come out to nyc and do some shows with us.......

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^lol didn't expect that. Thanks though. I'll RTF on one of your artist's tracks when I get home from class

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