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Old 05-01-04, 10:55 AM   #16
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Meters one easily.

Well let me go down the list. he had better structure, flow, metas, style, punches, should I keep goin? did I leave anything out?
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Old 05-02-04, 08:52 AM   #17
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breakdown for STriniBonafide:

flow:i swear people been reading the verses wrong damn nice job here no off spots on through the whole piece nice internal rhyming too 9/10

volcab:good job better then your oppenent here too i didn't see really anything wrong here 8/10

punches:i guess the weakest part of your verse there wasn't really anything over direct it was just vauge lines trying to hit 5/10

overall:22/30 great verse disipte the lack of any real punches

breakdown for meters:

flow:good job here basic no real internal rhyming to help it along 7/10

volcab:alright use still a level below your oppenent 7/10

punches:this is where you did alot better then bonafide you threw a couple nice direct punches, most were kinda played though best line," mean, my mind is almost as empty...as your fucking win column!" 7/10

overall:21/30 better punches but you lacked in everything else this battle

vote--STriniBonafide better all around verse so the punches were weak sometimes flow and volcab mean more if there working as well as his was
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Old 05-03-04, 09:29 AM   #18
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8-1 meters wins this
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