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10-07-05, 11:54 PM
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The Rise
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'Eye of Life'
IP: 24BB 344D
Seeking the truth,Beyond the fact of what I say in the booth Always pickin up cases,Sorta like the men in business suites Born to world with gods plans,Trying to Figure out the new lands But whats fuck up man,Countries fighting over dumbshit,'God Damn' Vision the future of love ones,But why cant I grasp fact they died Sent to heaven way past the sky,Sorta made me Open My Eyes wide Still picture my face reaction,Threw myself down with anger passion The exact day and place,Phone ringing ready to tell what happened And really I aint fed up with shit like that,Its Gods will Like when Katrina hit,thousands killed,and numbers keep rising still... Take a moment and pause,And try to wonder why for all this cause The government sellin products that kill,Just for money and profit People havin to pay for taxes,'Like the US aint makin enough of it' Teens revolving around drug abuse,Principle not making an effort The world is fucked up with obvisious proof,why we gotta suffer Last edited by -Cezar- : 10-08-05 at 12:02 AM. |
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10-08-05, 12:00 AM
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The Rise
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IP: 24BB 344D
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10-08-05, 08:55 PM
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IP: 2B10 C5A0
1 more link it waz okay 2 shor but tha line i waz feelin tha most was "Threw myself down with anger passion
The exact day and place,Phone ringing ready to tell what happened" work on ya structure though cause it waz kinda hard 2 read
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10-08-05, 11:23 PM
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IP: 24BB 344D
^^haha work on structure...first time i ever heard some one tell me that.Whatever thanks for feed...uppin
and "1 more link it waz okay 2 shor"? you dont make since. |
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