hey, 20 lines?..............................

sounds good man

gay @ no shit talking in the check ins

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can I grab a 24 hour extension? I got 40 lines to write for the LLL final and I've had a shitty week

Ya gonna eat ya words, cuz that's the gayest shit that I've heard
So you'd eat a Spoonful of shit...but would ya eat your WHOLE verse
You arrived on the scene bitchin' so what's the deal bum
We all saw ya Preface, we're just waitin' for it to mature into a real one
K, I'll stop talkin' 'bout ya in the mag, but don't tell me ya not a puss
I'll only speak on one condition, but you'll always be anonymous
Shitty week eh? Decompress n' relax, but then I'm gonna pound 'em
N' when I take out Com ^^^, it's easy to see how people feel around him
Ya girl looks like a dyke son, n' yea dissin' this guy's fun
I'm havin' a Whale of a time, you just have a wife that looks like one

Ya crew voted 4-0 for, non-crew 4-1 against, so die fool
Ya get Saved By The Crew so much, you resemble a sitcom on high school
Damn!!! Even the mod smacked ya n' you were livid n' yes
Your verse was Degraded, but honestly dawg I'd have gave it an F
Always gettin' dickrode, fag ya skills are the worst to date
You get LOTS of special treatment...
...that mixes up ya kids on which pills they should take
So no one's scared when ya gunnin', n' ya hint that ya frontin'
And I saw ya shadow of skill...
...that groundhogs would use to prove spring is comin'
Bitch we agree that ya too borin', n' hoe I deliver true whorin's
You're so Engulfed in losing, you could destroy what's left of New Orleans

Faggot.

I know you had other shit to write for, but that's messed up... didn't think this would happen, don't think i've ever seen you no-show... oh well, feed on my verse please fellas?

He DOES have the final of the LLL which probably takes precedence over this, but anyway I'll give you some feedback.


Ya gonna eat ya words, cuz that's the gayest shit that I've heard
So you'd eat a Spoonful of shit...but would ya eat your WHOLE verse
Even though it was a personal it was played, decent flip though
You arrived on the scene bitchin' so what's the deal bum
We all saw ya Preface, we're just waitin' for it to mature into a real one
Not really harsh
K, I'll stop talkin' 'bout ya in the mag, but don't tell me ya not a puss
I'll only speak on one condition, but you'll always be anonymous
Eh, coulda been executed better
Shitty week eh? Decompress n' relax, but then I'm gonna pound 'em
N' when I take out Com ^^^, it's easy to see how people feel around him
Meh coulda been dope, but again poorly executed
Ya girl looks like a dyke son, n' yea dissin' this guy's fun
I'm havin' a Whale of a time, you just have a wife that looks like one
LOL, nice personal
Ya crew voted 4-0 for, non-crew 4-1 against, so die fool
Ya get Saved By The Crew so much, you resemble a sitcom on high school
Solid personal
Damn!!! Even the mod smacked ya n' you were livid n' yes
Your verse was Degraded, but honestly dawg I'd have gave it an F
Nice again
Always gettin' dickrode, fag ya skills are the worst to date
You get LOTS of special treatment...
...that mixes up ya kids on which pills they should take
Not feeling
So no one's scared when ya gunnin', n' ya hint that ya frontin'
And I saw ya shadow of skill...
...that groundhogs would use to prove spring is comin'
You should have made this into a Shadow/Sonic punch if you were going to use Hedgehogs
Bitch we agree that ya too borin', n' hoe I deliver true whorin's
You're so Engulfed in losing, you could destroy what's left of New Orleans
Lol good closer

Quotables

Ya girl looks like a dyke son, n' yea dissin' this guy's fun
I'm havin' a Whale of a time, you just have a wife that looks like one
Ya crew voted 4-0 for, non-crew 4-1 against, so die fool
Ya get Saved By The Crew so much, you resemble a sitcom on high school
Damn!!! Even the mod smacked ya n' you were livid n' yes
Your verse was Degraded, but honestly dawg I'd have gave it an F
Bitch we agree that ya too borin', n' hoe I deliver true whorin's
You're so Engulfed in losing, you could destroy what's left of New Orleans

Well you started out pretty weak admittedly, with wording letting you down, but had a solid section in the middle with 3 back to back quotables. Then again you had some eh punches and finished with a nice line. Overall I'd say not your best, and I think you know it. But I guess you haven't battled in a while and you're shaking off the rust, so to speak.

sorry datruc like I said I've had a shitty week and I had 40 lines to write yesterday for the LLL final, but I've signed up for the lbl so we'll probably get to meet in there

You can still drop a quick verse if you want to

meh I'll throw sumthin down so its not all to waste..

I was in the final on RB , but still keying shit to leave you others rattled
Datru'll try his best.. I'll win with the shit to weak for my other battle
Coz prick the belt's where I was lookin', ya focus melts when com's cookin'
This bitch tried to turn on the style.... and pressed my wrong buttons
I'm sick of goading this geek, watch the votes thrown at his feet
there's his dickriders, my haters... and fact he wrote for a week
Dude you know where we come from, that shit's played out it's absurd
Coz its each to there own, so thats half of RB to your verse
And it wasn't ya punches I laughed at, this fucking moron can't hack it
So dude there's no hard feelings.. coz you hit like a faggot
Prick you got so near to winning, but yo believe it or not
Its time for you to say your goodbyes, coz you gotta leave on the dot .

i see the voting here is even better than on RB,


so if no-one's gonna vote I wanna point out one thing in Datruc's verse...

the fact of my crew voting for me in that battle... if you goto RB and check the final 16 for this season you'll notice that 70% of the final 16 were in my crew...

therefore even if everyone in the last 16 voted on that battle 70% would have been from my crew....

also the next few battles and the few before hand.. my crew regularly voted against me...

so meh at the fake personal