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Old 09-17-06, 01:10 PM   #1
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25. Bruce Bogtrotter (0-0) vs 26. Real Thoro (0-0) vs 27. Mr. Multie (0-0)

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Old 09-17-06, 05:19 PM   #2
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Wow a 3-way for the first battle on this site... Dope thanks kempo

Also since i dunno any of you fellas what you saw we do a pic battle or a hardcore battle or something along those lines
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Old 09-17-06, 09:21 PM   #3
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up to you and Real Thoro i'll drop due to the agreement
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Old 09-18-06, 11:58 AM   #4
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Blah aint have time this week.

12 match it

Mr. Mutli huh?

This kids still new to the board, so watch me pop his cherry
N ill smash bruise n bloody your face worse then marry
Your punches suck and this battle you wont win
Hope everyone saw your 1-2
Cause we all know that laughin is the best medicine
This kids gotta big ego, So fuck you be dead
And this kid couldnt be a flyweight
.............Even if i droped it on his fucking head


Real thorough dunno muc habout you but was banned for cheating

Reals a bitch and your text fucking sucks hoe
So watch me Ko Real quickand thoro him threw a window
You'll try to be creative but there's no limit to his wackness
You couldn't beat me, even if I helped this kid practice
Why even state your back noone knows you left why persist
Cause if you was to leave again, you wouldnt even be missed
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Old 09-19-06, 12:30 AM   #5
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unlimited lines........im not match'n shit, let me just get this outta the way now

Bruce...bruce...bruce shall we get started? nuff said

Bruce confide in ya master, im RVs local who'll disturb ya vocals
So i'll prove ya talk is a front, like prostitutes using a virgin mobile
But im destined to ruin you, punch n' text, til ya flesh ain't recoupable
Now watch his face get blown office head, without the sex in da cubicle

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Originally Posted by Bruce Bogtrotter
Artistik is dope but your whole carrer has just been a joke
'S why every time you get to the top of LLL
..............................................You fall short and choke


Slowly remove'n you, while you dickride n' diss's, there's flaws in ya tank
Your not elite you fuck'n fag, the closet ya mind comes to art is draw'n a blank

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Also since i dunno any of you fellas what you saw we do a pic battle or a hardcore battle or something along those lines

Serving this dude, you deserve the boot, this homo's through
I aint worried bout you diggin for dirt<----it really holds no proof
And by your drops in the cypher, i can tell that your needing rehearsal
So if your hungry or hearing impaired either way your def-eating the purpose

Now on to Real Thoro....like it matters lmao

Leave ya pen/pad in doubts, while you'll dickride ya spouse
Plus ya txts like old sex, i kno this pussy inside and out
Why should i clash with trash, pass that class, ya acts get rash
You'll only get 2 lines cuz you a cheek, thas only half my ass
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Old 09-21-06, 10:05 PM   #6
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But im destined to ruin you, punch n' text, til ya flesh ain't recoupable
Now watch his face get blown office head, without the sex in da cubicle

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This kids still new to the board, so watch me pop his cherry
N ill smash bruise n bloody your face worse then marry
This kids gotta big ego, So fuck you be dead
And this kid couldnt be a flyweight
.............Even if i droped it on his fucking head

V/Bruce....this was a weak one....multie you had that one line i like alot...shit was good but ya verse fell off to me...you had some played lines...work on your personals and punchs...the mobile line was decentish...bruce yours was decnt too but i felt it was more consistent those lines i quoted were ight...but you had a steady verse that gets my vote
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Old 09-22-06, 06:00 AM   #7
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Blah upppin... i know peeps need links
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Old 09-22-06, 12:14 PM   #8
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Old 09-22-06, 12:29 PM   #9
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Slowly remove'n you, while you dickride n' diss's, there's flaws in ya tank
Your not elite you fuck'n fag, the closet ya mind comes to art is draw'n a blank

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Nothing

Comin' in, I didn't know what to expect from Bruce cuz I ain't peeped him before, but I was kinda disappointed. Bruce, your stuff is just a bit too basic, no real wit to it. Like ur closer, he wouldn't be missed, just no creativity to that. The throw real in a window was ur best line, but it was forced cuz his name isn't Real Throw, lol, u had to change it to make it work. Sorry, just didn't think any of ur lines were quotable so try again next week with more wit.

Mr. Multie didn't come that great tho either. Line I quoted was a bit playedish but not that bad. Office line wasn't too bad either but I've seen a bunch of office lines before. Fix ur font tho man, just use a standard font, urs is newbish n' sometimes, perception is everything cuz if people perceive u as a newb, u won't get the benefit of the doubt.

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Old 09-22-06, 07:04 PM   #10
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i didn't really feel anything from bruce..
a couple of his lines seemed more like compliments than disses.. like-

Your punches suck and this battle you wont win
Hope everyone saw your 1-2
Cause we all know that laughin is the best medicine
i'm not going to click the hyperlink lol, so maybe i'm missing something but.. punchlines are meant to be funny - no? i understand how you may have meant this to go, but it didn't really read that way imo.
This kids gotta big ego, So fuck you be dead
And this kid couldnt be a flyweight
.............Even if i droped it on his fucking head
same case wit this one.. who really wants to be flyweight? i think this would've worked better with heavyweight.. but wtvr.

apart from that i felt a lot of his shit was pretty bland.

mr multi's wasn't much better honestly. i expected better multi's!!! lol. the def-eating wordplay was a bit played.. but he had more wit and creativity, so my vote goes to-

v/ Mr Multi.
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Old 09-22-06, 09:00 PM   #11
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didn't really have time this week next week will be better i've been spending time w/ my son but ups
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Old 09-22-06, 11:21 PM   #12
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Bruce confide in ya master, im RVs local who'll disturb ya vocals
So i'll prove ya talk is a front, like prostitutes using a virgin mobile
But im destined to ruin you, punch n' text, til ya flesh ain't recoupable
Now watch his face get blown office head, without the sex in da cubicle
Slowly remove'n you, while you dickride n' diss's, there's flaws in ya tank
Your not elite you fuck'n fag, the closet ya mind comes to art is draw'n a blank

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nothing

one sided battle really. Bruce gave it a good go but his punches had no real effect. He didnt have much with behind them and his flow was really off. Just need to learn to word shit better and drop more witty punches. Mr. Multi for the most part really just made me laugh. His verse wasn't tight but it was decent with whole comedy shit he has going on.

V/ Mr. Multi

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Old 09-23-06, 02:23 AM   #13
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Real Thoro no-shows.

Up over no-shows.
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Old 09-23-06, 01:23 PM   #14
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ehh whack battle here, nothing to me was real outstandish. a couple of okay to decent punches, 3-way battles suck most the time especially when they're like this. overall though i'ma have to give this to Mr. Multie for outshining Bruce who was sub-par to horrible in my opinion.

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Old 09-23-06, 07:03 PM   #15
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But im destined to ruin you, punch n' text, til ya flesh ain't recoupable
Now watch his face get blown office head, without the sex in da cubicle
Slowly remove'n you, while you dickride n' diss's, there's flaws in ya tank
Your not elite you fuck'n fag, the closet ya mind comes to art is draw'n a blank

vs.

nothing



hmmm... bruce... weak man



V/ mr. multie
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