16 Lines Max
Verses Due The 5th
No Other Bullshit.

checkin in

checkin in

ill wait for u to spit, if ya dont spit then ill spit b4 the time limit, until then im waitin for ur go

fine then ill go first since this 'kat' is 2 afraid to spit it first

STARTER
yo yo,
this lyrical disgrace that im about to defeat is known as 'pax',im gonna murder his ass and send the medical records to his mom by fax//
this 'kidd' was to scared to spit first because he needed some ideas from my rhyme,but no feedings allowd bitch so dont try to 'commit-a-crime'//
you couldnt bust out with something decent unless its a verse you 'bit' (stold),the only way you gain pleasure is by rubbin on your own tit//
pax is a lyrical disgrace who suffers from 'writers-block',hes the only male that was born dickless,without-a-cock//

PICKING UP THE PACE
bitch aint no rapper hes a wanna-be who trys to be like me but he aint no mc,he starts shit with me by stealing my verses and starting a 'controversy'//(multi)
right now pax is going through sites trying to find some lines to steal,but either way he wont overcome my power and thats the shit my lyrics will reveal//
paxs life had no beginning but it will have a 'deadly' end,my lyrics will end his life and he wont be missed cause he never had a friend//
its hard to belive that "pax is a vet",i "attack with intent",ta kill this kid but leave his will to his mother just "out of my respect"//
he must have beat newbies to get his record to "eleven n four",got him waitin out side "heavens gate doors",like porns im leavin this dudes ass "bleadin n soar"//

FINISHER
my flames are to hot for bare hands so pax better "nit his mittens",i dont kill but might "slice my victims",pax couldnt win this battle if he got JUVI to "write his writtens"//
im known to beat my enemys,i have a tendincey,ta drop ill rhymes more times than heads from chicks with narcleptisy//
ill slap this kid,and attack his spit,with enough lines to detach his lips,from his face and put them in his hands were hes able ta grip,but still couldnt toss lips full of ill - NESS//
ive declaird this kids wack,blind him to impair his vision black,writes his verse on cue cards cuz hes pullin more decks then baseball packs//
pax takes viagra to build up his body 'tension',but the fact that ive just murdered his ass is something he will never MENTION!!//

-Purple Haze

hey purple if ur on write back

yea im on man, but dont freepost on this thread, just PM me or something but dont post here

aight bitch dont be talkin shit, I havent checked this since i checked in the first time. Ive been busy with real life stuff... like work.


who the hell is "Purple haze", hearin that name right off the bat makes a thug think of "closeted gays"//
Only time this bitch "spits hard" is when he has a "dick-in-his-mouth", Ima leave him so burnt and charred hes gonna wish he'd neva me this dawg-from-the-south//
too bad fo u bein "undefeatable" is only a "tendency", for me itsa reality, ima show how little yo rec means-to-me//
You have a few choice words for me, like u my masta oh king, yousa bitch on yo knees befo me, thats why u only a wannabe M.O.D.//
I got this bitch set up with bit and bridle, like Ruben had clay in American Idol, and Ali had Frazier for the Heavyweight title//
"as the world turns" your small skills diminish, I'll call for the "General Hospital" cuz dog i got u finished//
Like "90210" U need less filler, get ridda the lies and get honest like the man on the penny, get down to the hardcore like "Sex in the City"//
My punches cut-through-yours, like dicks-through-whores, or bullets-through-pores, like firemen-through-doors//
u couldnt "cum str8" even if u wasnt duckin, U convinced me "your gay" cuz of these newbs u been fuckin//
This is for vets like me, so why'd you sign up for this tourney, cuz like "wet kindlin" u just "cant burn"-me//
U should take the time to learn-from-this, cuz like the blind u just cant see the obvious, I play mob politics, I'm with warlords and the Mob-with-us//
U pray to "theHandsofGod" for an angel like "LadyTrinity", so ur prewritten verses will get a little touch poetry biblicly//***
I just put yo skills-to-da-test, keep ya head up higher than Gary Coleman u just lost-to-da-best, I know my performance was "heartstopping" but try ta keep ya hands-off-ya-chest//
this battle is disengaged, this bitch hit the button for stop and stepped off tha stage, come back when your skills are worth gettin paid minimum wage//

***theHandsofGod has a rumor goin around about him bein a prewriter and LadyTrinity is a poet who has bible verses in her sig


And it has too many personals to be bitten bitch. I also matched u line for line

haze's bars where Stretched like a muthafukka...didnt have much worth quoting either...pretty mediocre verse

pax shit wasnt much better..had long ass bars too....both need to shorten ya shits...makes punches more effective....

i dont know...both shits was equally weak...neither had any hard hitting punches...ima have to go wit "PAX" tho...still a bad battle....

^^^not a good explanation, vote doesnt count, lets get some more votes!!!!!

Sureal: Don't try To Say Whos Votes Do And Dont Count In My League...

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i was gonna vote on this....but you guys are retarded.

16 lines max......

multis-n/a
flow-tie both were very choppy
punches-pax
creativity-n/a
personals-n/a

vote-pax just becuase he threw out something haze verse was just talk

^^^learn how to vote, can some actual people who actually know how to vote, vote, those 2votes didnt count even if u voted for me it wouldnt count,

its still 0-0 lets get some DECENT VOTES!