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11-22-06, 05:52 PM
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IP: 7BE2 A0A1
naw cause eryone d/r for yallz aint no doubt about that
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11-22-06, 06:07 PM
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Human Crack in The Flesh.
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IP: 0992 DDA2
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no its cuz u suck...quicker u get of RV the better
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11-22-06, 06:07 PM
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Human Crack in The Flesh.
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IP: 0992 DDA2
You piece of baby dick..
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11-23-06, 02:45 AM
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IP: 7BE2 A0A1
lemme spell this out for ya since u to stupid to know who u is fuccin wid Y.O.U. A.R.E. G.A.Y.
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NGN $MoneyMaker$ ~6lu loC~ Froze Cyko Enlightened Convict Playboyblaze Future Im a hustla man i supply all the feinds, im a hustla nigga i'll sell u a dream/-Tony Yayo |
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11-24-06, 04:41 AM
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Banned: Spamming
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IP: 4853 47FA
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HAHHA Froze u Stupid.......... But aye thiz was a pretty good diss n Justice That Boi Shiest ill Rip Ya bitch ass Up Just like Tonz iz gonna Do Ni99a |
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11-24-06, 03:00 PM
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IP: 7BE2 A0A1
Kilo Tonz aint got shit on me u fucCin slobk tampon lookin mutha fucCa
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11-24-06, 03:44 PM
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Banned: Spamming
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IP: 4853 47FA
r U Serious Dude u got problems U SUCK ya Fake
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11-24-06, 03:49 PM
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Human Crack in The Flesh.
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IP: DE21 0090
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word is bond...
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11-26-06, 10:33 PM
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IP: C0C4 9921
This was decent.. flowed well.. metas were kinda shaky but not bad!
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11-27-06, 11:33 AM
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Skadoosh!
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IP: BD83 5678
The word of the day is.... ELEVATION.
After reading this, I can say Shiest you need some serious elevation. You've got the concepts down straight, but you lack in the wording department. The wording is what makes the punch and at the moment some of your bars come off sounding awkward. Also, other bars come across too simplistic and a simplistic punch only works if it is really raw and packs a lot of humour. If you were looking at this verse for audio then it would be nice. It flows well and has some punches, although they are not very strong punches. In text, there is a whole different style and you have to work on developing that style and increasing your ability to word punches better for maximum affect. That is the truth. Don't take my words the wrong way like an NGN herb. 
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11-27-06, 12:29 PM
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Human Crack in The Flesh.
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IP: 4193 492A
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Wow that's the most positive advice you've given me, So their is a nyce guy behind that huge ego of yours lol. Good lookin' for the feed still 
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11-27-06, 01:23 PM
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Human Crack in The Flesh.
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IP: 4193 492A
"Elevation" lets all I ever see when I receive feedback, I have no Clue what it means
*sigh* I could sure use a mentor...
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11-28-06, 12:28 PM
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~*This Worldz A Sin So Why Hate Me For My Habits~*
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IP: 24C0 7BE8
this is pretty dope for a diss no joke i likes
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