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05-18-03, 01:22 PM | #1 | |
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This is a poem from a girl I know. Her grand father just died and she sent me this poem. I think she has potential. I juss wanna know what ya'll think of it. Hit me up!
Heres the poem: I Love You, I Miss You, I Need You We called him Poppy Keith With brilliant eyes of grey These eyes could make everything better and more worthwhile Very deep in his head With a unique double ring His thoughts could be seen at a glance Was there something behind those eyes that nobody could see Perhaps how depressed he actually was Or how depressed someone can actually be How couldn't anyone have seen? What hurt he was feeling inside We then wouldn't be in this hard and painful position What kinds of thoughts can drive people to the edge? Hatred, disappointment, sadness… How can we ever know? And how will we ever know He never missed one thing Like a parent he always had words of advice to help you You looked in the stands and there he was Proud as can be Always cheering looking so upbeat But facial expressions can hide a lot Hiding anger and frustration That nobody can sense Having a grandpa is such a wonderful thing Unless you take his presence for granted And then he is gone Nobody realizes what great a grandpa is… Until you can't gave that greatness any longer Being the great grandpa he was He was always doing everything and anything to make you happy Getting milk and food in the middle of the night Leaving the house at one and four a.m. Running to the pharmacy to pick up some medicine In order for someone to be happy He was always the first one to say I LOVE YOU No matter what you did you could never beat him to it Whenever you were feeling blue He was always there to help you through And whenever you needed to hear those three words He always knew the exact moment to say… I LOVE YOU He would drop everything that he was doing Just to spend one minute with you if he could But now I won't ever get another minute, not even a second Until we meet again in Heaven Not only was he perfect in every way He was so caring towards everyone and everything Always dealing with everybody's problems Never bothering anyone with his own Sometimes I wish he wasn't like that Then maybe we would still have him here with us today But that was him and how he was It probably wouldn't have changed Once people do something their whole life It's hard to change But despite how depressed he was He was always there He made it a "must do" on his list Now I know there will never be a grandfather so great Unless it is one of my grandpa's sons Whom he has raised well But still… There will be those certain things we miss That only Poppy could do And somehow we will have to forgive him for what happened Because there is NO way you can stay mad at him for over a day, barely even a minute Remember the good times Forget the few bad And keep him and the love for him in your heart FOREVER AND EVER And also remember… Don't ever pass up a chance to say I LOVE YOU For Poppy Keith never did! |
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05-18-03, 01:40 PM | #2 | ||
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This was amazing.
This girl has something ot be able to write about fher grandfather in such a way.... obviously it is hard but to be able to write this. this is a tremendous work.
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05-18-03, 09:28 PM | #3 | |
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She definately has potential! This was an extremely good writing. Tell this girl to get on here and post some more of her stuff. I'd definately enjoy reading it. She expressed everything so well on paper. She made me like the guy and I don't even know him.
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05-18-03, 09:31 PM | #4 | |
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IP:
Thanx man. I thought the Same.
Looking fo mo oppinions on this!! ************************************************** ************************************************** **** |
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05-19-03, 08:49 PM | #5 | |
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IP:
C'mon someone give me some oppinions
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05-19-03, 08:51 PM | #6 | |
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IP:
It was deep and I think she has potential and she should use that as fuel for her to continue R.I.P
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05-19-03, 09:14 PM | #7 | |
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IP:
Str8 up homie. Any one else?
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05-20-03, 07:32 PM | #8 | |
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IP:
C'mon lemme get some mo posts on this girl.
Im gonna have a new poem comin soon. |
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