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Let ME fiiiinnd ooout

checcin in son...

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yea, checkin' in. And check ur PM's

Ur wack, almost as bad as school shootins n' other shit that i've seen
Lately there's been cause for K.ontroverz.Y...
... to get kicked the fuck outta the league

GBA = gimmich battle association
GBA = game boy advance

lets go


Listen, I flow Like Pissin,
D's like bathroom activity, he just groans....& stalls..
no doubt ur flop, He's like october, He's known to fall..
All D's Hip Hop is at "de feet" Fucc rappin, he shulda took dance..
& u know he's a joke,
..........................when he hosts the G.B.A AND STILL CANT ADVANCE..

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Kontroverzy's Myspace

I can't advance?! I CHAMPED THE FUCKIN LEAGUE u dumb dude
U got so much trouble gettin' facts straight, they wanted to seduce u

weak.


Kon-too much wordplay in your lines, it really threw them off. Seemed a bit forced, overall concepts were straight though..Harshness of both bars..were eh.. ok
Nothin too special

DaTrus-same with you. Good concepts, but not harsh enough. 1st bar was ok, wording could have been better, but still ok. 2nd bar wasn't as good in my opinion. simple flip. not harsh at all.


V/DaTrus.

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lol stubbs u trip me up sometimes

trus-1st bar was decent, see that style alot n i woulda preferred u to have said "kicked outta the fuckin league" instead but still not bad
kon-1st bar was played as fuckkkkk, and the 2nd was clearly not true and a bit stretched.
trus-2nd bar was fuggin hilarious lol never seen that concept before. good shit

v/ trus

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ROUND 1
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Ur wack, almost as bad as school shootins n' other shit that i've seen
Lately there's been cause for K.ontroverz.Y...
... to get kicked the fuck outta the league
Real simple... barely decent. 1/2

VS

Listen, I flow Like Pissin,
D's like bathroom activity, he just groans....& stalls..
no doubt ur flop, He's like october, He's known to fall..
Hell nah. 0.5/2

Truz

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ROUND 2
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All D's Hip Hop is at "de feet" Fucc rappin, he shulda took dance..
& u know he's a joke,
..........................when he hosts the G.B.A AND STILL CANT ADVANCE..
So-so, kinda creative. Didn't need the explanation though. 1/2

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I can't advance?! I CHAMPED THE FUCKIN LEAGUE u dumb dude
U got so much trouble gettin' facts straight, they wanted to seduce you
Lol, if this is concept is what I'm thinking, this is actually pretty fresh. Nice. 1.5/2

Truz

KY didn't even feed, DTH did once. Plus he had the definite POTB.

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VOTE: DTH
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D's like bathroom activity, he just groans....& stalls..
no doubt ur flop, He's like october, He's known to fall..
^^^ the fall like the season concept is soooo played its close to being retarded to think u could drop and stand a chance agianst anyone. u could of said he's like bunjie jumpers, tits w/o a bra, ahha even a spider on ice skates woulda been a better flip on the fall concept than the regular season play. get creative please
All D's Hip Hop is at "de feet" Fucc rappin, he shulda took dance..
& u know he's a joke,
..........................when he hosts the G.B.A AND STILL CANT ADVANCE..
^^ first dont have wordplay in your first line expetially not a defeat line and if u goin us a defeat line spell it like defeat and word it so people know that your playin it like "da feet", u shouldn't have to use "" and actually spell it out to make your wordplay work. and also i did a defeat line like.. dude hearin dafeat so much he must have speakers in his shoes. and that was at least 2 years ago and even then i was told how played and wack that wordplay was. so yeah, read up. and same with the "GBA", if u gotta explain your punches that much, you absolutely should not use the line cuz it garenteed to be way too forced.

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Ur wack, almost as bad as school shootins n' other shit that i've seen
Lately there's been cause for K.ontroverz.Y...
... to get kicked the fuck outta the league
^^
yeah simple, but just perfect exicution with the wording and leading into the punch, somethin very very few people in this league know how to do. so this is good just for havin the correct structure which can make any punch at least 5 times as good.
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I can't advance?! I CHAMPED THE FUCKIN LEAGUE u dumb dude
U got so much trouble gettin' facts straight, they wanted to seduce you
^^
didnt get this one. are u sayin is fact arent str8 and therefore would seduce him?
either way..

vote- trus

for not coming extremely played and knowing the correct format for creating a punch

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