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Let ME fiiiinnd ooout

ughness.....dth u fuckin stalker

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i had no part in the setting up of this match, lol

We all know u a fag, fuckin Fruit, let's consider this net bout
Im in another mind State, punches from my Delaware yo Apple out

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micnificant911 (10:35:18 PM): heeeeeelp
DaTrusHurtz (10:35:29 PM): sup man
micnificant911 (10:35:47 PM): ok im actually gonna try this week lol but
micnificant911 (10:35:52 PM): my wording is fuuuuuuuuuck
micnificant911 (10:35:58 PM): I dont understand the hype, are yal REALLY feelin that???
Its entertaining for a short while im too big for that crap
Dave Chappelle is fuckin wack, i cant believe this fool
His jokes are so predictable...Pop prolly came from his gene pool
Dude oughta stay off the air, im not fallin for ya bull, bitch
Come off ya hiatus, y? Aint u learn when Mase tried pullin that shit?
Gone again like the wind. Ya came n left, ya viewers are suckers
He was such a Burnout, EA games could feature him on the next cover
Have yal seen this dude's shape up? His barber CANT be legit
So if theres money on the Line...Chappelle wont be receiving it
DaTrusHurtz (10:36:01 PM): u finally tryin' to elevate?
micnificant911 (10:36:07 PM): *sigh* yes

'Bout time man, but heres the real advice u need for whorins'
U should name ur kids help...
... that way u'd have NO trouble screamin' for him
lol i'm at least 4-0 against u, this whole scene is easy
But Tony woulda been a great father to me...
... I know that he'd never beat me

dont close this, ima drop when i get home

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That nigga Showcase is waaaack, cuz mayne im on a mission
N by the looks of things *looks around*
..............................o sorry, figured i'd diss the competition

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Eh, i was feelin both of your 1st bars.

Tony 1st bar had a pretty good concept in it. i liked the overall wording as well, not bad. actually havent seen that type of wordplay in a while. harshness wasn't all that high, but some was there. 2nd bar was weak. either i didn't get it, or it was just like i think it was weak attempt.


Datrus- i liked your 1st line as well. good concept wording was ok. 2nd line was also ok, nothin real good but it standed out in a particular way that made me laugh. i don't feel like the wording was that strong though..


v/sorry T but i got Trus on this one as well.

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Let ME fiiiinnd ooout

We all know u a fag, fuckin Fruit, let's consider this net bout
Im in another mind State, punches from my Delaware yo Apple out
cool
That nigga Showcase is waaaack, cuz mayne im on a mission
N by the looks of things *looks around*
..............................o sorry, figured i'd diss the competition
ehhh ok



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'Bout time man, but heres the real advice u need for whorins'
U should name ur kids help...
... that way u'd have NO trouble screamin' for him
ehhhh ok
lol i'm at least 4-0 against u, this whole scene is easy
But Tony woulda been a great father to me...
... I know that he'd never beat me
lol


Both had decent concepts.. wording was off on soem of them but they were still decent.. I have trus winning though becuase thought his punches where a little harder.. :/


V/Trus

Fuck did you say Tony? You wack sonnabitch...


Trus first bar was ehhhh, decent at best. His second was cool, pretty good...seems a bit simple but oh well.

Tony's first punch was pretty nice...wording was an issue and he could have took that punch so much farther but it was okay...Second bar was just wack to me...only dope part was my name...


V/ DaTrusHurtz

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