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Old 04-22-07, 08:14 AM   #1
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Week 3: Jay-Brook 2-0 .vs. -Coop- 0-0

IP: 477E 12AE

Sunday: Battles are setup
Wednesday Night: Jay-Brook 1 bar
Thursday Night: -Coop- 2 bars
Friday Night: Jay-Brook 1 bar
Sunday Morning: Battles close

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Old 04-22-07, 05:46 PM   #2
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werd uppin................
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Old 04-22-07, 11:51 PM   #3
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Ok, check .
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Old 04-23-07, 10:20 PM   #4
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You couldn't win a COUPLE battles if you and ya rec were married pro lovers.
cuz last time coop was a threat......I was at the last stage in Mario Brothers.
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Old 04-25-07, 07:41 PM   #5
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You suck at rappin, and you'll never have a career wit the pen
Of course he was on his last stage... cuz no one wants to hear him again
Your girl? Yoshi blew my dick so much, her head went up and down
Stretched around, n now everytime she Bowser neck'll touch the ground

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Old 04-26-07, 07:35 PM   #6
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A girl must be a animal to date you............. either that or she's decently faking.
so if I told him to hold his horses he might restrain the girl he's recently dating.

wateva
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Old 04-26-07, 08:18 PM   #7
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Jays first punch - Alright, nothing great. It was ok. Could've been cooler probably.

Coop

First punch was meh, kind of basic.. but Ok
2nd punch was cool wp, funny punch

Jays 2nd punch- meh wording killed it, it couldve been a bit better..
But didnt hit well at all regardless.


Vote - Coop, for his Wp in the 2nd punch. That won the battle.
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Old 04-26-07, 08:41 PM   #8
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wateva....uppin for more votes
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Old 04-26-07, 09:41 PM   #9
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Yeah, Jay. I don't understand why you try harder on rb. and come here and post
shitty bars. Your basically reminding me of how you texted as evil. Your comin out with those ol concepts and weak wording again. don't slip.

Coop-i agree with alpha. 2nd bar won it here. pretty clever. Nicely worded. i like how you played both bars off of his first. really shows creativeness. And potential. keep it up


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Old 04-26-07, 10:44 PM   #10
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Jay..your first line was decent..some name play..your second bar was not that great..jus some played concept..

Coop..your first bar was a flip..did its job..and your second bar was good i liked it. it won you the battle. niceeeee

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Old 04-27-07, 03:17 PM   #11
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Jay Brook:
You couldn't win a COUPLE battles if you and ya rec were married pro lovers.
cuz last time coop was a threat......I was at the last stage in Mario Brothers.
^This was a cool concept. Decent punch. 2/5
A girl must be a animal to date you............. either that or she's decently faking.
so if I told him to hold his horses he might restrain the girl he's recently dating.
^Hah. Funny diss line but not too agressive. 2/5


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Coop:
You suck at rappin, and you'll never have a career wit the pen
Of course he was on his last stage... cuz no one wants to hear him again
^Hah. Damn nice clownage. 2.5/5
Your girl? Yoshi blew my dick so much, her head went up and down
Stretched around, n now everytime she Bowser neck'll touch the ground
^Lol. Nice wordplay on Mario characters. 2.5/5




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Old 04-28-07, 01:52 PM   #12
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You couldn't win a COUPLE battles if you and ya rec were married pro lovers.
cuz last time coop was a threat......I was at the last stage in Mario Brothers.
ok
A girl must be a animal to date you............. either that or she's decently faking.
so if I told him to hold his horses he might restrain the girl he's recently dating.
lol ok


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You suck at rappin, and you'll never have a career wit the pen
Of course he was on his last stage... cuz no one wants to hear him again
ok
Your girl? Yoshi blew my dick so much, her head went up and down
Stretched around, n now everytime she Bowser neck'll touch the ground
played wordplay, alot of people on RB have used bowser wordplay

v/Jay only because coop had a played last line
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Old 04-28-07, 09:27 PM   #13
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jay...your first punch was kinda weak....but i liked the fact you tried to be creative
2nd punch was kinda funny...something i havn't seen personally before..

coop..your first punch was ok.....i would say it's about as good as jays best
your 2nd punch was a decent flip on the whole mario brothers shit..i would say that is a little better than jays first...

so my vote goes to coop....barely
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Old 04-29-07, 12:04 AM   #14
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Coop Wins 1-0
Jay Brook Loses 2-1
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