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Old 05-21-07, 09:21 PM   #1
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Old 05-21-07, 10:39 PM   #2
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feelin this beat..like that guitar

ya voice sounds pretty martketable..i like your swag on this track. good job. quality is pretty good as well..maybe turn ya vocals down a little. sound like you from the East.

hook seems real empty..maybe add some adlibs.



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Old 05-22-07, 01:54 PM   #3
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ya hook is lame. good pressence on the mic for sure. good quality and all just doesn't go into the hook very well. and ya the vocals too loud, and i usually like that but they still a lil too loud.
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Old 05-27-07, 11:09 AM   #4
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Old 05-27-07, 11:52 PM   #5
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Ight hook is weird as fuck..

I like you're voice tho, but flow is kina sloppy it's like you jus started rapping regardless of the beat pattern

quality is nice tho

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Old 06-03-07, 10:30 AM   #6
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Old 06-03-07, 12:43 PM   #7
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beat is def. hot

rock n roll nigga!!!!!!!!

flow is slick here...but the delivery cud be upped some to make it really POP...

Im def. noddin my head

like ur smokey soundin voice...real husky...sounds kewl on track


slick soundin track bro


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