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Old 11-29-04, 08:13 PM   #1
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Topic: Envy
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Old 11-29-04, 08:15 PM   #2
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consider this my checkin....
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Old 11-29-04, 08:36 PM   #3
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check check....
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Old 12-05-04, 04:29 PM   #4
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sorry my neighbors took me to BigBear...

She was my cure, she made me pure
Without her my life would be a blur
She's a divine creation; blessing by the Lord
Our love couldn't be described with words
She opened zones, her breathe my own
Intimate were all the moments we spent alone
Her hair so fair, skin so tender and smoothe
breasts round and full, no blemishes or a bruise
All her demands would suprise her that I would meet
Taking comfort as I guard her body as she sleeps
She hadn't learned of our passionate disposiiton
She would soon desire our long forlorn traditons
One night we were all alone, in our home there was a ring
THere he was, chisled, tall, and yet evil's seed
MY love for her beautiful body, and his evil raged
Yet I couldn't stop my excitement as the slowly engaged
He became me, his body my own, as I slowly mimic their actions
I became one with them form my desolate spot, full of satisfaction
Ahhhh the feelings of ingenuity built on top of with society
I Deeply moan as pleasures of God's time with me
As my deed done, my exhilation turns to rage
Hes been holding me from my loved one, self imposed cage
My search franticaly for his demise, an object of pain
Steel to make quence my eternal thirst for limbs, his blood my rain
MY screams mirrored his own, dark clouds surround our home
the darkness only revealed one light her helpless groans
I grabbed her soft pale hand tainting it with his blood
His filth contaminated her enough , his mud on my dove
I brushed her hair aside to look into her hazel eyes
Her silence for minutes and the look of suprise
I felt down her soft breast, lusciously with passion
As my hand lowered I felt an object protruding and fastened
I felt a handle, what is this object here
as I looked down only the devils breath made such evil appear
A knife affecting us all, death at it worst and best
a sun risen in the east, clouded by the moon in west
her beauty stolen from within but mine for the knife
for us both now to lay as husband and wife
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Old 12-06-04, 06:36 PM   #5
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no show.....damn.......sorry genocide........
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