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the_crazy_one 1 16.67%
upfront 5 83.33%
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Old 09-14-04, 10:14 AM   #1
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the_crazy_one vs upfront

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Old 09-14-04, 10:22 AM   #2
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Old 09-14-04, 11:17 AM   #3
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lyrically blessed my words are like bullets there hard to digest/
commin at ya neck harder than a dracula on meth/

me merkin u in a battle is undeniable u a unloyal bitch u unreliable im jus that damn versitile/

its funny ur 16 but ur occupation says u kill fellas/
the only thing u eva killed was hoagie ur overzealous/

~~~~~closer~~~~~~

nigga u aint "the crazy one" i smash u wit beats like dat nigga farell/
its real funny how u say u kill people but havent been on the ther side of a jail cell/
u aint even notrious ya name rings -no- bells-
ill smoke bricks by ya head blow u up like a -dope -sale-

~peace~
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Old 09-14-04, 12:13 PM   #4
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Old 09-14-04, 12:34 PM   #5
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<center>you be the blood i be the crip,/
bullet holes in ya face -homicide in your fuckin crib.//

you talk to much shit -time to put an end to it,/
bust ya voice box ya family watches as paramedics have ya body zipped.//

i throw lyrics like fireballs,/
victim = blood 4 life pierce his torso.//

you slang lifes a bitch so you gonna pop your self o in ya asshole,/
plese dont -ill leave my phone number call me when you become suicidal.//

ill do the job quick with pride,/
piss on your tombstone - and run away with ya wife.//

down and out</center>
 
Old 09-14-04, 12:37 PM   #6
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now lets et some votes
 
Old 09-14-04, 02:57 PM   #7
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uppin yallllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll llllllllll
 
Old 09-14-04, 03:02 PM   #8
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ooohhh he has a "closer" hahahaha i love it when textcees name their lines. "opener" "finisher" "closer" etc... but yours was deff better than dude above. oh by the way farell is Pharrell.

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Old 09-14-04, 03:44 PM   #9
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^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^dick Rider^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
 
Old 09-14-04, 03:50 PM   #10
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r u seriouse i dunt even talk to dren but thanx for tha vote dren UUUUPPPPPIIIINNNNN
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Old 09-14-04, 04:05 PM   #11
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word, this kid is pissed at me cause i voted against him in two battles. haha man dude's lame. i don't know any of these battle kats. i got bored from posting in other sections and decided to vote for once.

why you gotta call somebody a dick rider? is that a last minute diss to somebody that truely thinks you suck? i have lost all respect for you as a textcee...which you really didn't have much to begin with.
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Old 09-14-04, 04:49 PM   #12
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hahahah sounds like a futa battle but y0o keep da votes comin

uuuuuupppppppiiiiinnnnnnnn!!!!

~peace~
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Old 09-14-04, 05:03 PM   #13
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Not a great battle

Upfront.....your flow was decent but structure was bad, you had punches but they were wll weak and played, u attempted a personal with the pharell line but it didn't hit hard, but u were somewhat creative so dats a plus

crazy....your verse was more like a topical than a battle, u told a story, you had no attempted punches in ya verse or personals but flow was nice and structure was better than hiws but punches, presonals win battle so even tho his was weak he had a few at least

Vote: Upfront

No hate jus being honest with my vote, holla back
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Old 09-14-04, 05:10 PM   #14
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thanks mayne uppin and thanks for showin me wha i did wrong ~peace~
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Old 09-14-04, 05:17 PM   #15
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you be the blood i be the crip,/
bullet holes in ya face -homicide in your fuckin crib.//
^^^^^^^^^^^^ EHHHHHH NOT AN GOOD OPENR TO ME

you talk to much shit -time to put an end to it,/
bust ya voice box ya family watches as paramedics have ya body zipped.//
^^^^^^^^^^^^ OK KID WHERE DA PUNCHES AT

i throw lyrics like fireballs,/
victim = blood 4 life pierce his torso.//
^^^^^^^^ OK GOOD INFANT PUNCH

you slang lifes a bitch so you gonna pop your self o in ya asshole,/
plese dont -ill leave my phone number call me when you become suicidal.//
^^^^^^^^^^^^ aight dats a good punch

ill do the job quick with pride,/
piss on your tombstone - and run away with ya wife.//
^^^^^^^^^ not an good closa

lyrically blessed my words are like bullets there hard to digest/
commin at ya neck harder than a dracula on meth/
^^^^^^^^ flow where'z da punch

me merkin u in a battle is undeniable u a unloyal bitch u unreliable im jus that damn versitile/
^^^^^^^^ vocab flow and a punch


its funny ur 16 but ur occupation says u kill fellas/
the only thing u eva killed was hoagie ur overzealous/
^^^^^^^^ flow vocab and a punch

nigga u aint "the crazy one" i smash u wit beats like dat nigga farell/
its real funny how u say u kill people but havent been on the ther side of a jail cell/
u aint even notrious ya name rings -no- bells-
ill smoke bricks by ya head blow u up like a -dope -sale-
^^^^^^^^^^^^ yo nice closa


aight it came down to punches the crazy ur shit was too basic to me (my opinion) u had no vocab but punches were good yo opner and da closa was wack~but u got betta on dem 2 parts in da middle (punches)

upfront nice verse i like yo opener and da closa i was mainly lookin at that when i saw yo 2 middle partz verse u had vocab flow and a punch but didnt hit hard enough keep at it mayne ur gettin betta~

dats why i should give crazy one da vote

no hate,no beef just my opinion

~peace~
 
 


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