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10-16-06, 08:27 PM | #1 | |||||||
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street poetry
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I lead a life filled with crime yeah, im stuck in the streets Im steady losing peace of mind Cause of cops on the beat So where do I go to whom do I turn? Im headed to eternal damnation, forever I'll burn and never I'll learn.., Cause im still stuck in my ways Im stuck in a daze like a bat ive lost sight, yea im stuck in a cave Im stuck in a maze Im trapped and my mind is a haze Things no longer makes since ive lost track of my days So now i will blaze Just to feel oh so glorious Im ready to die, so now i feel oh so notorious But still im on a quest and ive veered from my path and knowledge is the water that i use for my bath Uppin for feedback |
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10-17-06, 04:16 AM | #2 | |||||||
illmatic
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IP: 10D7 5181
let me know whats hood
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10-17-06, 04:30 AM | #3 | ||||||
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well this should have been posted in OPEN MIC sone real...if you gangsta flowing it dont belong here first off man....nice shit nice multies and metaphors and detail feelings but take this to OM.......i feel you should take it there and not here poetry is a more deep connection with your inner feel and emotion and poems speak through how they feel and shit son so yea......
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