look, im hard as hell, and this here's not hard to tell/
shyt dawg im sick dawg, man im far from well//
dark pits harmless but im lit wen i charge a cell/
u get torn n pissed on like garbage pales//
reguardless, i pardon my skills, gaurdian im hawkin over/
wit no wings im as high as tha nawlens boarder//
flowin hurricane katrinas if u tawkin more of/
remorseful orders, just die like u coughin organs//
forge'n my styles the only way i'll step off/
but my rep's gotta cost, cant pay than get off//
cuz i can match you like a clep(clip) toss/
imma rep-this flaw-less bar-spittin retar-ded ar-tist//
till i cant even hardly bar-spit/



charge-it to the flame that imma take outta hell/
but im steady spittin bars like im breakin outta jail//
shyt i never been-a-fish but this is re-dic-u-liss how im breakin out the scales/
water that imma take up out the well//(whale)
fonies im more than real im the realist, feel it/
like a big tit, dig it like a pussy wit no walls to feel with//
real shyt, tawkin a getchu killed quik/
im a heartless, will discharge the gat till it go clik//
raw-ish, law firm lawyer wit no court ta swish/
johnny cockerans biggest fan ta call this//
pause, no controller, posted boulders/
but this flow dont roll hoe it just hit//



dont risk it, listen, i cant be stopped like a piston/
this dick cant b cocked//
like a fist and, pick this? cant b locked/
like a gym wit, no coach carter get-it?//
cant b stripped like a porno flick that just wont unpause for shyt/
im on full with a guage that just wont unpause for shyt/
imma dog that just wont shit, imma bitch/
wit no dog ta lick ta get on hard for shyt/
imma car that just wont unstart for christmas no card to get//
try n steal my bars n u just will become a tar-get//
for me to rip in half like a parlament wit no guard for it to just become the carter quik//
lil waynes first builin i built it, dealed out of it n sealed it//
im the niqqa to chill wit//
me personally im the biggest revealed se-cret/
that just aint got signed, autograph this//
flow all day like a boat all day on a ocean wit no row ALL DAY//
get sprayed like PAM, better yet PARKAY wen the hawk spray/
raw aye, cant b cooked like a pot wit no contents n no eye to sparked mate//
but let me stop, for RV get to sayin im the shyt and the piss, and the toillet and the hand to wipe with//



this nice and nice this, same difference im hyped shyt, i cant even see who can rhyme like this wit a flow just as nice as this, i should b a moderater but i just cant b liked like this.. i aint even cocky, im skinny.. but a hype like this a get payed to get rocs the size of my fist.. n imma b high till i die like this.. but i dont do crack i do weed.. imma G, shyt if thass the case im the alphabet, im out of it.. insane asylum simpson Bart of it, yarder stick.. flow so long need a car to get to the other parts of it.. sorry, ima male darlin its hard to explain so just take it n b calm with it

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I SUGGEST U GET SOME LINKS SOON MAN BEFORE THEY LOCK UR ISH UP

but in any case....alot of played concepts in here but ur structure and flow and multis is nice.....im feelin ur style....kinda reminds me of jada and jayz mixed

imma rep-this flaw-less bar-spittin retar-ded ar-tist//
till i cant even hardly bar-spit/
^^flow here was real good
fonies im more than real im the realist, feel it/
like a big tit, dig it like a pussy wit no walls to feel with//
^^likes

flow all day like a boat all day on a ocean wit no row ALL DAY//
^^likes


but let me stop, for RV get to sayin im the shyt and the piss, and the toillet and the hand to wipe with//
^^very clever....good innovation here

shyt if thass the case im the alphabet, im out of it.. insane asylum simpson Bart of it, yarder stick.. flow so long need a car to get to the other parts of it.. sorry, ima male darlin its hard to explain so just take it n b calm with it
^^these were ur hardest hitters right here if u ask me......some audio worthy ish

im feelin ur style cuzzin

.........but if u want the crown of RV....lol maaaan.....text wise......dawg u got quite a ways to go, im pretty sure u can change up ur style loads.......like myself......but ur gonna need to up ur wordplay delivery and concepts a LIIIILLLLLLL better than what u got
if u want a lil lesson on concepts and wordplay.......peep my Arr-ogance Omega piece.....(o and notice right there that was one already AIR AGAINST OMEGA lol ooo i crack me up)

good lookin.. that was just a keystyle.. could go aggin... uppin for more comments tho

gotchu


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^^lol ur lucky i was just bout ta close this

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oh thats wassup, i was feeling this, i give it a 10 cause it was sick